Open Poetry #26 |
Welcome to the nightmare |
Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
Welcome to the darkside welcome to the me close your eyes little children you may be scared at what you may see Ladies, gentlemen and freaks step this way hurry now the show is about ready to begin To our right we see an inner child battered crying for breath kick him if you like he's use to the pain hurry now no time to waste Now we enter the caverns of sin can't you hear my evil tainted thoughts echoing off these walls making me want penace Come on now and join me under my skin see how blood and pain bitter flows join the demons dancing in my veins Cheer up you say can you tell me how when all my roses have thorns and all my gardens weeds Can you tell me how to dream when all my dreams are nightmares and all my nightmare dreams I have found happiness and pain one in the same for what are heaven and hell but only names So you wanted to know me did you like what you see? welcome to my nightmare pleasant dreams |
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Zaynab Member
since 2003-05-04
Posts 59Kuwait |
Woah, electrifying! Brilliant the way you've done this, as a tour through you, your mind and soul. I can relate to this so much... Do you mind if I print it out to put up in my locker at school? It just hit home so hard that, I don't think I can leave this site without having a permenant copy first... All credit straight to the poet of course. Zaynab xxxxxxxx Kill me tonight and I will love again |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
I would be honored |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Powerful, intense, insightful, deep write! The best teachers have the biggest ears |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yeah, i know that side too, I hate those people that say "I'd love to get to know you better"...they really don't want to, they just don't know it |
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