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Toerag
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0 posted 2003-06-04 07:52 AM


How 'bout them rhyme makers,
Ain't they fine?
Puttin' down words
And makin' them rhyme.

The dadburn poet types
Showin' they skill,
Some use-a keyboard,
Other's use a quill.

Talkin' 'bout love,
Talkin' 'bout sorrow,
Writin' them now,
Readin' them tomorrow.

Them ever lovin' poet writers,
Ain't the neat?
Writin' them words,
With rhythm and beat.

Wanna write-a ditty?
If ya get the notion,
Put-it inta words,
Put your pen inta motion.



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Bill Charles
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1 posted 2003-06-04 07:59 AM


Toerag - yep, dem poets is neat...

BC

Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2003-06-04 07:59 AM


Toe,
You are so talented, It must be in the genes.
The question is who's? LOL enjoyed.

Bec
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3 posted 2003-06-04 08:12 AM


Hi Toerag...

Very cute. Yes, them poets are fine, aren't they? I really wish I was as good as them!

Bec

"Poetry and Hums aren't things which you get, they're things which get you. And all you can do is to go where they can find you."
-Winnie-the-Pooh

Nan
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4 posted 2003-06-04 09:38 AM


...But - Can you right with yer TOES??...

Earth Angel
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5 posted 2003-06-04 09:40 AM


Well, my dear friend!--appears as tho youse  one of dem pome righters yerself!


Linda

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6 posted 2003-06-04 09:42 AM


Toe, ya'll got it right!! Ya shore do!!
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7 posted 2003-06-04 09:52 AM


Yup indeedee!

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

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8 posted 2003-06-04 10:22 AM




Ain't we just the cat's meow?!
Good one Toe !!
hugs, Chris

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9 posted 2003-06-04 10:25 AM



Can he write with his toes?
I'll bet he writes with his nose!
For his springs are all sprung
so I think he's begun
to warm to the test
when we show our best
that we all write for Toe!
[Isn't it so?]



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10 posted 2003-06-04 10:47 AM


Toe darling heart, don’t look now but you’ve written something incredible again. Truly darling man is it necessary for you to excel in whatever and whichever style you write? I’ll answer my own question yes it is because you cannot write anything that is not superb.

Slip softly to the depths of me
Rouse my sense to possibility
Whisper the words I love to hear
Bathe my soul in beauty’s tears
Stroke my mind with softened grace
Stir within a memory’s trace
Call forth the dream of a maybe
Tempt me with a silent plea
Gift me a dream of poet’s light
To sprinkle yes through the night
       And I will spin a dream for you
       Flavoured with sighs rainbow hue

Love and warm stuff
as always
Mushy

Tomorrow is another day I don't know what it holds
but I can face the future with courage brave and bold

Footprints In My Heart
Kethry

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Patricia
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12 posted 2003-06-04 02:26 PM


Toe,

You act like dem poets are foot fungus
Toe......I got news, you'd be among us.



Patricia

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13 posted 2003-06-04 04:02 PM


I enjoyed this, as it was really cute like you!
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14 posted 2003-06-04 04:04 PM


Yep,  they be fine,  dem riters of pomes.

Cute write Mr. Toe.  Edgar Allen Toe!!

Earth Angel
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15 posted 2003-06-04 08:20 PM


I had to write another reply when I read Barry's reply!

His reference to you as Edgar Allen Toe is very special, considering he is Edgar Allen Poe II !  

Huggums to you both!
EA

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16 posted 2003-06-04 08:28 PM


Dis jest as cute it cn be.  Joyce
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17 posted 2003-06-05 11:03 PM


ROFL... now why would reading this remind me of fish in a guitar? LOL

I enjoyed this very much, Mr. Pome Righter. *G* Ya done good. *S*

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Toerag
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19 posted 2003-06-06 07:49 AM


Thank you all for the nice replies....it's time for another war me thinks..where's Bally and LJA and now Larry C?
Pilgrimage
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20 posted 2003-06-06 01:26 PM


I jest luv all them po-tree types.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

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21 posted 2003-06-06 02:17 PM


haaa...we know you like them rhymer types

M

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