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Open Poetry #26

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majnu

Senior Member

since 2002-10-13

Posts 1088
SF Bay Area

0 posted 2003-06-03 07:54 PM

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I blinked, and awoke to a brand new world;
21 centimeters background is all around,
The Spin changed in a galaxy far, far,
Away from here another's eyes close and
Open upon different wordsl again.
And if you can keep your eyes open,
Unblinking, unflinching,unwinking -
For some length of time awake -
Present in your present, not elsewhere,
Then you can see the world change.

-majnu
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Timid thoughts be not afraid. I am a Poet.

yv
Senior Member

since 2003-05-30

Posts 574

1 posted 2003-06-03 08:01 PM

Wow. What else is there to say except, wow?! Awesome write and awesome read I must say. I hope to read lots more of your work.

Junior Member,
yv

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

2 posted 2003-06-03 08:02 PM

very well written,,,,

Poetry is a vision that portrays ones impressions.QjQ

majnu

Senior Member

since 2002-10-13

Posts 1088
SF Bay Area

3 posted 2003-06-03 08:55 PM

ty for the read and comments.

-majnu
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Timid thoughts be not afraid. I am a Poet.

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