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Drexler_McStyles
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0 posted 2003-06-02 12:31 PM


in a week we will know
a lot more
about the texture of
our relationship
after Ive gone sailing
through the hazel wilderness
after you’ve searched
the baggage you keep
in your heart
my words are hardly ever delicate
but I know
you can read my mind
like an audience can read
cues from a telestrator
even when I mean to do well
it usually ends up
at the bottom of a glass
but at least I know
that you love me for the effort
its not every woman
that you can say that about



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Gaia
1 posted 2003-06-02 12:35 PM


congratulations
love becomes you, Steven

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2 posted 2003-06-02 12:44 PM


Steven, she sounds like a nice
person. Congratulations!!  
Hugs  
Ethel

JamesMichael
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3 posted 2003-06-02 07:09 AM


Love the last four lines...James
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4 posted 2003-06-02 08:48 AM


A write full of realism and insight...and lots of hope...nice Drexler..

believe in what your heart feels...

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with you
5 posted 2003-06-02 11:15 PM


sounds like a good woman, to love you for who you are, and how you try
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6 posted 2003-06-03 02:54 AM


beautiful!
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7 posted 2003-06-03 09:27 AM


What did you find out after the week went by?

Drexler_McStyles
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8 posted 2003-06-03 11:30 AM


I dont know, i still got 4 more days before liftoff....

steven

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9 posted 2003-06-03 08:45 PM


Four days!!!  I can hardly stand the suspense.  I hope we hear about it...I think...
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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10 posted 2003-06-03 08:51 PM


heart pieces are the best! I love this - you express yourself through words very well - Ciao Bello Roniece
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