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QjQ
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since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756
U.S.A.

0 posted 2003-06-03 07:20 PM


When it's Time


We set closely at the outdoor
amphitheater.
our ears hear the
sounds of love coming from the
orchestra.
drifting into the warm
nite breezes.
then with impulse our lips touch.
holding hands we
walk along the path
our eyes
meet and passion warms
then
into the stream we wade with
water tempering our passions

till the time is right.


Poetry is a vision that portrays ones impressions.QjQ

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Joe Houck
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since 2001-04-23
Posts 324
california
1 posted 2003-06-03 07:23 PM


good stuff....I liked this
Joe


yv
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since 2003-05-30
Posts 574

2 posted 2003-06-03 08:05 PM


Breathtaking.  Simply breathtaking.  Very romantic and melodious.  I loved reading it.

Junior Member,
yv

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia
3 posted 2003-06-03 08:26 PM


Oh this is very nice!! I enjoyed the visual   Ciao Bello Roniece
Thomas119gold
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since 2002-06-03
Posts 708
Biloxi, MS (city by the sea)
4 posted 2003-06-03 09:14 PM


Picture perfect
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