Open Poetry #26 |
When it's Time |
QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
When it's Time We set closely at the outdoor amphitheater. our ears hear the sounds of love coming from the orchestra. drifting into the warm nite breezes. then with impulse our lips touch. holding hands we walk along the path our eyes meet and passion warms then into the stream we wade with water tempering our passions till the time is right. Poetry is a vision that portrays ones impressions.QjQ |
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Joe Houck Member
since 2001-04-23
Posts 324california |
good stuff....I liked this Joe |
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yv Senior Member
since 2003-05-30
Posts 574 |
Breathtaking. Simply breathtaking. Very romantic and melodious. I loved reading it. Junior Member, yv |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Oh this is very nice!! I enjoyed the visual Ciao Bello Roniece |
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Thomas119gold Senior Member
since 2002-06-03
Posts 708Biloxi, MS (city by the sea) |
Picture perfect |
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