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QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

0 posted 2003-05-08 01:12 PM

We As One

As we sipped our wine
We watch flames diverge
Our moments intensify
With sighs of divination to
Give us motivation to become
Entwined as one

It matters not how you answer, It matters only that i hear you.

Sybil
Member

since 2002-09-12

Posts 73
Midwest

1 posted 2003-05-08 01:56 PM

To watch flames split
then come together again,
can be mesmerizing.

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

2 posted 2003-05-08 03:45 PM

Q:

very nice - leaves a lot to be imagined

hehe

xxoo

JilGirl
Member

since 2003-05-24

Posts 364
Washington

3 posted 2003-05-30 11:10 PM

I like this short, sweet story!

Blessings!
Shirl

Till oceans cease to flow and deserts lose their sands, may beauty surround you every day and wealth be in your hands.

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

4 posted 2003-05-31 12:15 PM

beautiful thoughts....much enjoyed

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

5 posted 2003-05-31 01:49 AM

QjQ,
Well it is indeed an interesting write. (And it does feel good to be this close to SEA!)

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2003-05-31 02:54 AM

mind in the gutter...

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

7 posted 2003-06-01 09:35 PM

Enjoyed the beauty of these thoughts.
Nicely penned.
~Vicky
"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

Patricia
Member Elite

since 2003-04-06

Posts 2160
Missouri

8 posted 2003-06-01 09:38 PM

Q,

Very romantic verse. I love those...allows a daydream to unfold in my mind!
Lovely...

Patricia

whiskey

Senior Member

since 1999-12-28

Posts 1278
Australia

9 posted 2003-06-01 09:42 PM

Wonderful verse, well written, I enjoyed it, very romantic in few words

Julie

"Dont cry because its over, smile because it happened. "

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

10 posted 2003-06-02 01:35 AM

Glenn, this is a very pretty, romantic poem.
I really like it. You are very good at
writing these short poems.
Hugs

Ethel

Thomas119gold
Senior Member

since 2002-06-03

Posts 708
Biloxi, MS (city by the sea)

11 posted 2003-06-03 09:13 PM

Nice write I enjoyed it

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