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QjQ
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0 posted 2003-05-08 01:12 PM


We As One

As we sipped our wine
We watch flames diverge
Our moments intensify
With sighs of divination to
Give us motivation to become
Entwined as one

It matters not how you answer, It matters only that i hear you.

© Copyright 2003 gMt - All Rights Reserved
Sybil
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1 posted 2003-05-08 01:56 PM



To watch flames split
then come together again,
can be mesmerizing.

littlewing
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2 posted 2003-05-08 03:45 PM


Q:

very nice - leaves a lot to be imagined

hehe

xxoo

JilGirl
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3 posted 2003-05-30 11:10 PM


I like this short, sweet story!

Blessings!
Shirl

Till oceans cease to flow and deserts lose their sands, may beauty surround you every day and wealth be in your hands.

SEA
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with you
4 posted 2003-05-31 12:15 PM


beautiful thoughts....much enjoyed
Larry C
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5 posted 2003-05-31 01:49 AM


QjQ,
Well it is indeed an interesting write. (And it does feel good to be this close to SEA!)

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

passing shadows
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6 posted 2003-05-31 02:54 AM


mind in the gutter...
vlraynes
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7 posted 2003-06-01 09:35 PM



Enjoyed the beauty of these thoughts.
Nicely penned.
~Vicky

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you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

Patricia
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8 posted 2003-06-01 09:38 PM


Q,

Very romantic verse.  I love those...allows a daydream to unfold in my mind!
Lovely...

Patricia


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9 posted 2003-06-01 09:42 PM


Wonderful verse, well written, I enjoyed it, very romantic in few words


Julie

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garysgirl
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10 posted 2003-06-02 01:35 AM


Glenn, this is a very pretty, romantic poem.
I really like it. You are very good at
writing these short poems.
Hugs
Ethel

Thomas119gold
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11 posted 2003-06-03 09:13 PM


Nice write I enjoyed it

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