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Open Poetry #26

Keir

eminor_angel
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since 2003-05-22

Posts 323
Canada

0 posted 2003-06-03 07:13 PM

Keir

The cold night shivers when you walk by
The ice above all ice
Dark night glows radiantly next to you
The heir to darkness
Love recoils in fear of your face
And blood leaps for joy at your kiss

QjQ
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since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

1 posted 2003-06-03 07:16 PM

good write,,,

Poetry is a vision that portrays ones impressions.QjQ

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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2 posted 2003-06-03 09:15 PM

A melting of ice? Enjoyable read, Eminor...thank you.

majnu

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since 2002-10-13

Posts 1088
SF Bay Area

3 posted 2003-06-03 09:33 PM

very cool. the last line i especially liked.

-majnu
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Timid thoughts be not afraid. I am a Poet.

eminor_angel
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since 2003-05-22

Posts 323
Canada

4 posted 2003-06-03 10:55 PM

Just in case anyone's wondering, 'keir' is Gaelic for 'black'

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