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dreambuilder Member
since 2003-03-23
Posts 319caddyshack 
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I am a leaf gliding in the wind longing for the tree not knowing where I'll end seperated from comfort searching for reason there seem to be no answers perhaps it's just the season . . . all that we see is but a dream within a dream . . . |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
"To everything there is a season." But so sad here. The verse is beautiful nevertheless. I hope you find your tree soon. -Patricia |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
I love the play on words here. Really well written. Chris  "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Your feeling of separateness is so very well expressed here .... there is always transformation, Spring brings renewal, the leaves are born again ... Beautiful, even if melancholic! Love, Margherita |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
dream: You will find your tree soon - I feel like this more than you know. I adore your writing - and hey! another New Yorker! Very cool. I see that you admire Poe - as do I Excellent write - xxoo [This message has been edited by littlewing (04-14-2003 12:36 PM).] |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Bittersweet words but beautiful..always loved this theme in writing, adrift on winds..can't say much for actually living it though.. grin |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful words..much enjoyed!! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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dreambuilder Member
since 2003-03-23
Posts 319caddyshack |
Patricia - hopefully a cherry blossom with the heart of a redwood lol Chris - thank you - I try to have a variety of writing styles Margherita - thank you... so far the pains of change are a bit overwhelming but I am holding out for brighter days. littlewing - in ElectricLadyLand - WOW -obviously a fellow Hendrix fan... Littlewing & Angel are 2 of my favorites Thank You for the sweet words You made my day Aenimal - by writing I can occasionally release some of the bitter making my life a little more sweet sounds like you need flying lessons... Thank You for your thoughtful words my friend Nancy - Thank You.I needed that...hugs back [This message has been edited by dreambuilder (04-14-2003 08:08 PM).] |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Thank you dream - nicest compliment one writer can give to another xxoo |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
I really love this..... Seasons come and seasons go.... Completing that never-ending circle!!!! Yes, the season will pass.... Enjoyed!!!! Hope to read more from you!!! Take Care, Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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dreambuilder Member
since 2003-03-23
Posts 319caddyshack |
Bridgette - I loved this: "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." It should be possible - but I haven't figured out how to yet - thank you for reading & bringing this out of the archives I am still in my winter season - hoping it isnt an ice-age lol thanks again |
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