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dreambuilder
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caddyshack

0 posted 2003-06-09 01:56 AM



I am a frog
awaiting love's first kiss

Only to have
a knight
in shining armor
approach


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BluesSerenade
Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
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By the Seaside
1 posted 2003-06-09 02:07 AM


What about the princess, I heard she was the one who started the whole thing.  

Maybe that was another story~

ribbit, ribbit~



passing shadows
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displaced
2 posted 2003-06-09 04:43 AM



littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
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3 posted 2003-06-09 07:41 AM


Hey dream . . .
missed you - where you been?

and this . . .
*shaking head*

doesnt this princess know that frogs
turn into the best knights anyhow . . .

nice write
as always
she's there -
xxoo

Aenimal
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since 2002-11-18
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the ass-end of space
4 posted 2003-06-09 04:00 PM


sorry this made me laugh or maybe I've misread it lol
Chris-
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since 2003-06-09
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5 posted 2003-06-09 04:02 PM


im sorry it made me laught too i hope i didn't misread either
Selina
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since 2003-06-07
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6 posted 2003-06-09 04:42 PM


Kinda made me giggle and then say "awww.. poor frog.."  

littlewing
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7 posted 2003-06-09 07:23 PM


No Raph - it is meant to be read both ways . . .
I asked . . . btw he is looking for the princess lol

[This message has been edited by littlewing (06-09-2003 07:25 PM).]

Kellsue
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since 2000-05-06
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8 posted 2003-06-09 07:36 PM


Little frog, your princess will come - but watch out for that knight!

Kelly

You can give without loving but you cannot love without giving
There is no danger of developing eye-strain from looking on the bright side of things

dreambuilder
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caddyshack
9 posted 2003-06-10 01:12 PM


Blues - I had hope - but I think I was tricked by a rumour - lol

shadows - ty I needed that - smiles

littlewing - I think she wants a knight & wont look deep enough to see the frogs potential - lol

aenimal - no you didnt read it wrong its just my luck thats all

chris - hopefully I can hop away fast enough - ewwwwwww

Kelly - with my current luck she would see the knight  - say hey silly dont kiss that frog  - & make it her mission to make the knight straight - lmao - where is MY princess & I hope she likes cute frogs - lol

thanks for reading everyone

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