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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-06-03 10:15 AM

Dawn

he spoke
to me
in velvet
traces felt
like silk
and after
cotton spin
he was
gone

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

1 posted 2003-06-03 10:18 AM

Oh, Helen.....this one is a

and going into my libary. Yes !! hugs, Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....

-Emily Dickinson

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2003-06-03 11:17 AM

"he spoke
to me
in velvet
traces felt
like silk"

what an awesome way to describe a man's voice...wow

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

3 posted 2003-06-03 11:55 AM

well done!

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

4 posted 2003-06-03 04:39 PM

Wow....!!
Eric

Temptress

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

5 posted 2003-06-04 01:07 AM

No words..
just need your work to be recognized more.

You could hurt me with your bare hands. You could hurt me using the sharp edge of what you say. JEWEL

Richy
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

6 posted 2003-06-04 03:00 AM

This poem, woven with it’s choice words of varying textures, was not only appealing to the sense of sight, but to the sense of feel, as well.

Very smooth, and delicate,

And very much enjoyed!

Richy

chinesestone
Member

since 2003-06-04

Posts 76
China

7 posted 2003-06-04 03:04 AM

a short poem,but very good,

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

8 posted 2003-06-04 03:22 AM

he spoke
to me
in velvet
traces felt
like silk

I love this verse. Simply beautiful!!

Hugs

Ethel

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

9 posted 2003-06-04 03:53 PM

You know Helen you can paint the most vivid pictures in such few words, and so beautifully too.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

10 posted 2003-06-05 04:58 AM

just beautiful, you always have a way to get into my thoughts

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