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Hold The Night |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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 Hold the night baby, can you teach me.......how you sing in your sleep how you trace a moonbeam.......across this soul in shadow’s keep my love do you have the definition......for what I see in your eyes how is it you can speak in twisted riddles........while telling me no lies baby, can you teach me......your words that do in trance sway my heart in your rhapsody.......such eloquent romance my darling is there a translation......a way to somehow convey teach me to speak it....... in libidinous linguistic way and baby can you teach me.......how you dance, drenched in dream colliding two hearts.......in passionate scream while enfolding emotions......in swirling starlight tell me love........how.......how do you hold the night ~SEA~ [This message has been edited by SEA (06-02-2003 11:46 PM).] |
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Eromyna Member
since 2002-11-29
Posts 306Pheonix, AZ, USA |
Wow. That is beautiful! "I don't need to scream for you to deem me aggravation." |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Susan...this is simply gorgeous. I've really missed reading your poetry. It's good to have you back 'home'.  Hugs,  ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
SEA - for some reason your writings are better than ever. You're very talented... BC |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Sea, I read this beautiful poem at least half a dozen times. I went to pour coffee, in my head still echoed the rhymes. Exquisite...I would quote a few great lines...but it seems the whole verse consists of great lines. Patricia |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
SEA, YOU sure do know how to hold the night. This is absolutely beautiful! |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Susan, ======================== baby, can you teach me.......how you sing in your sleep how you trace a moonbeam.......across this soul in shadow’s keep ======================== You don't mind that I have to reread your poems? I can't seem to get enough. When I was a newlywed at 19 years of age. My heart felt what you write. But my pen was ill informed! If I seem to be green it is only envy.  If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow! beautiful! glad to see you around again! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
One of my favorites...enchanting...he holds the night everytime he holds you in his arms...James |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
beautiful.flowing with good timing.great aliteration.heartfelt.thank you for sharing it with us. Goldenrose. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful Susan...exquisitely beautiful. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
susan romantic as ever...nice to see you back...h |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Seems to me you've got romance covered... or uncovered!  So good to see you in the blue again! |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Perfect SEA !! hugs, Chris |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
beautiful always Susan , I have always loved the way you are able to express so tenderly Hope |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Ethereal, transporting, soul-touching, exquisitely beautiful... Warm hugs, EA |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
very pretty! |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Sea, you know that this hopeless romantic simply loves this beautiful poem...Simply gorgeous....the poem and the picture.  Hugs  Ethel |
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Tara Simms Hall Member
since 2001-11-07
Posts 87South Carolina |
Oh, this is amazing. I love the English language, especially the way you command it. |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
oh man...That was exquisite!! Glad you're back!!!! I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man. |
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apoetdreams Member
since 2003-06-01
Posts 52NJ, USA |
That was wonderful. And I want to go lie on a beach right now and watch the sunset. (but it is raining again)...  Make your words as sweet as honey, someday you may have to eat them. |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
So sensuously written.. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
This is so beautiful and lyrical...great job! Eric |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
A beautiful romantic write. Absolutely love it... made me go WOW! Glad to see you back. Maree |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
loved this |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Oh my gosh, this just knocked my socks off. Fabulously creative writing and a magnificent picture. Brava ... hugs, Marti |
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LastMoments Member
since 2003-03-07
Posts 92 |
Very Nice |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Eromyna~ thank you Vicky ~ aww dang, thank you BC~ that is so wonderful of you to say, thank you so much! Patricia ~ wow, you are much too kind...thank you! Kacy~ thank you so much Larry~ you are so darn sweet to me, thank you  Dixie~ thanks! it’s great to be back around James~ that is very cool, thank you GoldenRose ~ thank you very much Nancy~ thanks lady! Helen~ thank you for that Karilea~ either way eh?  thanks, it’s good to get more time in here!Chris~ cool, thank you! Hope~ that rocks, thank you very much EA~ oh I like that, thank you!! Brad~ thanks! Ethel ~ very nice of you, thank you Tara~ you are so nice, thank you KoKo~ thank you, I’ve sure missed everyone here APD~ that sounds like a great idea, rain or no.... Scorpio~ goodness...thank you!  Ericc~ thanks so much Maree~ wow works for me, and thank you I am glad to be back Vandana~ thanks Marti~ that is so cool, thank you very much! LM~ thank you |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Susan, this is absolutely lovely. Judging by the many replies you've gotten, I'd say you've been dearly missed, sweet friend. |
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yv Senior Member
since 2003-05-30
Posts 574 |
Amazing. That was absolutely breathtaking. Literally. I read the first line and was in awe. So romantic, so tender. I loved it. Junior Member, yv |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Michael ~ thank youYV~ thank you most kindly! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
my darling is there a translation......a way to somehow convey teach me to speak it....... in libidinous linguistic way ================================ the moth is late...(out of town company here) but I wanted you to know how much I loved this one..and ya know the moth is smiling at the alliterations and ellipses.. very cool poem Sea-girlie Im still imagining your voice ... |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
Wonderful Great Beautiful ah the heck with it Bravo. Agree A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Your writing shimmers and glimmers so smoothly as it skims across the ~SEA~ Loved every word of this, as always~ |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Wow! When you show up you sure do it in style! This is absolutely exquisite both in poetry and presentation - you get an A+ Just lovely. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this is so damn beautiful, had to bump it again! |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Nice to sea you back and writing again missed your words |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwwwwww, this is so beautiful, sweet friend, I'm so happy to read you again as I always admired reading your colorful expressions of love! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, you always hold the horizons high with a smile, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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