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Open Poetry #26

Remains

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-06-02 11:50 AM

Remains

standing by
the charred
mark
no smoke
carried by
the wind
I touched
the ashes
just memory
of where
sweet fire
had been

Poe_Pot_Pie
Member

since 2003-06-01

Posts 107
Canada

1 posted 2003-06-02 12:22 PM

Very nice! Finally, a poem short and sweet!

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2003-06-02 12:28 PM

this is fantastic...

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2003-06-02 12:37 PM

yeah, I have ash on my fingertips too...

bslicker

Member Elite

since 2000-12-04

Posts 2321
state of mind

4 posted 2003-06-02 08:55 PM

this is nicely put h,
and from the ashes,
one emerges as a new phoenix,
to bring more memories,
as the wings span wide,
to reach out.

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

[This message has been edited by bslicker (06-02-2003 08:58 PM).]

whiskey

Senior Member

since 1999-12-28

Posts 1278
Australia

5 posted 2003-06-02 10:21 PM

Lovely write, I enjoyed it very much

Julie

"Dont cry because its over, smile because it happened. "

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