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Lugubrious Day.
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Lugubrious Day. |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665
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November, not cold the morning mists across the land unfold. flushing finches from muddy fields, they flee into trees. Groups of goldfinches,greenfinches and yellowhammers search for seeds from teasel and thistle, rarely seeing days like these. Photographing dew drops in my mind, forming on the branches of birch. While across farmers fields, fieldfares in noisy chattering groups, on hedgerow branches perch. A solitary seagull flies high above my head, oh lord how i wish i was dead, so i could return to earth as a bird, free instead. This dreary,dismal,doleful day, drifts in mists and brings lonliness to stay. |
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Poe_Pot_Pie Member
since 2003-06-01
Posts 107Canada |
That was great! I really thought it was well said! I hope you write more!  |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Phil, you have a unique talent which I am glad to see you sharing with us. I can't wait to see what tomorrow will bring! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 wonderful write...just sadly beautiful |
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yv Senior Member
since 2003-05-30
Posts 574 |
In a word, glorious. As usual, very beautiful and melodical. Even the simplest of statements exudes such beauty and power. I love your work. From a now junior member, to a fellow junior member, love in the simplest form is your words. Junior Member, yv |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Lovely write, very nicely expressed  I enjoyed it very much Julie "Dont cry because its over, smile because it happened. " |
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