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Open Poetry #26

The Rain

Dreamless Decay
Junior Member

since 2003-05-30

Posts 13
MO

0 posted 2003-06-02 01:02 AM

Finding missery in the heat of day,
On a bed of nails I must lay.
Suffer through and through in the light,
Struggle to maintain with all my might.
Searching for the right state of mind,
Confess it's all very hard to find.
Rain pours down on my head,
Forget all that I had said.
Finally in the pouring rain,
I do escape all the pain.
Free to do what I will,
In the rain I sit still.
With the rain I have a true friend,
All my woulds will soon begin to mend.
The rain is a release,
A state of peace.

"Looking over your shoulder fleeing from The Reaper...Look closer seeing only your own reflection in a puddle of rain."

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

1 posted 2003-06-02 01:07 AM

Living in Vancouver I know how cleansing the rain is, and especially if you are walking in it with tears. Well done.

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

2 posted 2003-06-02 01:42 AM

With the rain I have a true friend,
All my woulds will soon begin to mend.
The rain is a release,
A state of peace.

This is a really pretty poem. I love the
rhyme and the form you wrote it in.
Thank you for sharing it with us.

"To be in love with love is truly to love".....by Paladin
~with heart hugs from Ethel__GG~

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