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Drexler_McStyles Member
since 2002-11-18
Posts 195Venice, Ca |
so your father asks.... what would you rather have Steven a good bottle of vodka or a good book.... well, sir..that would depend on my mood..If Id spoken to your daughter that day, I would probably take the vodka....if I hadnt spoken to her, Id trade the book for more vodka... .............now showing............... I just smoked a bonglit and now im feeling kinda tan looking like fidel castro driving a convertible sedan every time I sit down to start a conversation a woman shows up with a mouthful of degradation I heard clearly the posture of her threat so I sipped on some rum and told her where she could get friends in higher places had slipped me an advance of the new radiohead album and it killed my urge to dance it didn’t help matters or none that I could trust that the cylinder of her thigh took a chisel to my rust Im 28 years old and stand about 2 meters high when asked about it later it brought a tear directly to my eye let not jump the gun or off of the ship not when I can attach my right of passage to the cabinet of her hip a bit full of myself yes I know but better my stories than an order to go Im sure you catch my drift or you wouldn’t have stuck around youd be sitting at the border waiting for me to leave town posthaste it was not to be missed when all the virgins checked their wallets to see if I was on their list I knew my tenures as confidant were already in foreclosure earlier in the day when I lost my panama hat and forgot what I was gonna say anyhow the tendons are all pulled now but the ice, it is very cold and it doesn’t matter to anyone if its blood or if its gold it doesn’t matter to me either it all came to pass just in time for a breather from the devils behind the glass ................ goddamn little fool, I love you like you were my passport why do I do this because id rather fail and flounder than sit on my hands and bark like an old dog (this has nothing to do with anyhting) [This message has been edited by Drexler_McStyles (06-03-2003 10:17 PM).] |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"but better my stories than an order to go" yep, I agree 100% * but I don't believe that last line |
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CaseyLeigh Junior Member
since 2003-05-15
Posts 48 |
you honestly think the vodka will help? |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow...Im speechless...a definite one to come back to for some reason I can't put my finger on |
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Ishmael Member
since 2003-06-01
Posts 51 |
Very nice Mcstyles. Enjoyed. |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
"why do I do this because id rather fail and flounder than sit on my hands and bark like an old dog" nah, that's not it, you're just not giving yourself many options...same reason i haven't taken up knitting... |
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