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A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart

0 posted 2003-06-01 04:59 AM



THE DEPTHS OF MY LOVE

Rivers of my love run deep,
Into the valleys of your heart,

Neither height, nor depth,
Nor moutains too wide,

Could show you,
The depths of my Love,

Way beyond the seas,
Throughout all eternity,

Could never show you,
The depths of my love,

Into the sun,
Far beyond the sky,

A thousand tears,
That I have cried,

Could never show you,
The depths of my love,

Forgiveness beyond measure,
Memories to treasure,

Love written as a lullaby,
Enchanted dreams of you and I,

Could never show you,
The depths of my love,

Miles and time,
Song and rhyme,

Money or gain,
life or pain,

Could never show you,
The depths of my love,

Loving me, embraceing me,
Eternally,

Will show you the depths of my love...

[This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (06-01-2003 07:08 AM).]

© Copyright 2003 Millette A. (Lester) Addison - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
1 posted 2003-06-01 07:22 PM


You write beautifully about the depth of your love.
Enjoyed the read.
Love, Margherita

QjQ
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since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756
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2 posted 2003-06-01 07:26 PM


very nice write,,  

QjQ

scorpio
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right...there
3 posted 2003-06-01 09:28 PM


A heartfelt write...I enjoyed your words..

believe in what your heart feels...

Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
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Melbourne, Australia
4 posted 2003-06-01 10:03 PM


Absolutely beautiful!!

Take care.....Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

ThisDiamond
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Michigan, USA
5 posted 2003-06-01 10:14 PM


Enjoyed the style of this piece...well done.
ThisDiamond

Goldenrose
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6 posted 2003-06-02 09:17 AM


beautiful,delicious and deep.perfectly written.

Mon Cherie
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7 posted 2003-06-02 09:31 AM


Milette, this is really beautiful! Thanks for sharing!

_,,,^.^,,,_
Florence

passing shadows
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displaced
8 posted 2003-06-03 04:13 AM


beautiful tender write
JamesMichael
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9 posted 2003-06-03 06:03 AM


"Loving me, embracing me eternally, will show you the depths of my love"...lovely romantic.   James
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