That Which Gives Me Pleasure

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Elizabeth Santos
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-11-08

Posts 9269
Pennsylvania

0 posted 2003-06-01 11:54 AM

That Which Gives Me Pleasure

It would please me if you were to
Reach inside of me,
To touch me in sentimental places
Where I’ve never been touched.
If you could tenderly stir my deepest joy
From the secret wells of womanhood
Swirling me in a dance of warmth and sincerity

It would please me if you were to kiss me
To taste the essence of who I am
The fury of my passion
The sweetness of my scent
The simplicity of my wants

You would fill my heart with joy if
You were to love me
To love me in a very special way
Known only to us
Savored only by us
Embraced only by you and me

It would please me if you were to know me
And to know me is to touch my spirit
To kiss my tears, to feel my passion for life
To discover yourself in my love for you

If you were to gently cup some blue forget-me-nots
In the masculine strength of your hand,
Instead of bestowing a vase of roses
Then you will have come to know
the simplicity of my needs

And that would fill my heart with
deep and abiding pleasure

Elizabeth santos

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2003-06-01 11:58 AM

This is very beautiful work here. I really enjoyed it.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2003-06-01 12:30 PM

Ohmygosh Liz!! I love this!
You're a woman after my own heart!

I too would rather have a handful of daisies than a bouquet of roses!
OOOH..how I love this...a keeper for my library!
Love ya dear Lady!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

3 posted 2003-06-01 12:53 PM

Lis, this is beautiful and so you! It seems that you and I think alike and of course this is a keeper~

Melissa~

Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world!

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2003-06-01 01:03 PM

big smile

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2003-06-01 04:39 PM

Very nice...james

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

6 posted 2003-06-01 04:42 PM

Elizabeth:

you nailed it

like wildflowers from the side of the road
sometimes love is simple . . .
we tend to make it complicated
truly
this is lovely
xxoo

[This message has been edited by littlewing (06-01-2003 04:42 PM).]

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

7 posted 2003-06-01 04:47 PM

Elizabeth,
A poem that will float in the sea of eternity
Sy

Richy
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

8 posted 2003-06-01 07:00 PM

Hi Elizabeth, this poem is exquisitely wonderful! From the endless flow, to the gentle and affectionate message.

I absolutely love it!

This is one of those, “Perfect Love Poems” to be treasured, always.

Richy

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