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A Coming Of Age
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A Coming Of Age |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri 
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A Coming of Age Donned the disguise Under the guise Appearances be kept Tripped the maze Of youthful phase A thousand tears wept Of wisdom sage She comes of age In her middle years With lessons self taught Passage rite bought Release of foolish fears Free to explore Her spirit now soar Wings fully spread From bird’s eye view She is made anew By soil she had tread. [This message has been edited by Patricia (06-01-2003 05:26 PM).] |
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Poe_Pot_Pie Member
since 2003-06-01
Posts 107Canada |
That was great! I really liked it! And it didn't drag on like some poems do. I look forward to seeing more of your peoms!  |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
This one soars! thanks for sharing an upward lift  |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Nothing like getting your second wind on turn number 3. I know this feeling. Learned at the School of Hard Knocks. Nicely said. |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Patricia, I love this poem. Especially this part.... Free to explore Her spirit now soar Wings fully spread From bird’s eye view She is made anew By soil she had tread.  You fly, girl..... [This message has been edited by garysgirl (06-01-2003 02:50 PM).] |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
"She comes of age In her middle years With lessons self taught Passage rite bought Release of foolish fears" Ain't life grand! *smile* Thank you for sharing this. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Patricia! I love this . . . I so relate to it more than you know free spirit - later in life lessons learned - tough lessons but yes . . . one day to fly beautiful I apologize if I missed your entrance Welcome to PIP! you fit nicely xxoo |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Patricia, I love this new style of poetry you used, you’ll have to teach me how OK? Patricia, I hope, like most, if not all of us, that the more that you write about your feelings, the easier things will get? I really have faith in you, that no matter what happens to you. You will always land on your own two feet. All my best to you! Wonderful write, as always, Richy |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Patricia - fly, and soar to the heavens. Nice write... BC |
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