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In Deserted Moments
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In Deserted Moments |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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In Deserted Moments I wonder why I think of you in deserted moments of my day. The million kisses I have stolen just from thoughts that come my way. Amazing, though I try to please, surrendering to yesterday. I've framed you, set you by my side and that is where you'll always stay. I tell myself what chance is there, while waiting for a moment's meet. Was it not just yesterday, that you had swept me off my feet. I'm holding plans to spring alive a list of such, a balance sheet. Reminding me of faith in dreams reaching for the real, complete. Time is always on my side, though aging still, another year. A touch of warmth, I feel inside when comfort calls and you appear. I've chiseled points, unmasked the hide, denial not a word to fear. The softness rises when you stride and eyes of mine rest on yours, near. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
wonderful rhythm, flow and feel to this piece Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
This is just exceptional. Even in the midst of your darkest hours, you write with skill and heart. I'm in the midst of one of the worst writers block I've ever had. I tried writing earlier, and it was like pulling teeth. Painful while doing it, and painful after upon reading my effort.  |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Another lovely write Maureen. Chris  "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thank you Virginia and Chris. Anne, I have never had a writer's block, although there are times when I don't wish to write. Sometimes just reading another's words or title will give me inspiration if I need it. ~Smiling M |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
This is really beautiful, Maureen. Glad I stumbled across it tonight. Hugs,  ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Maureen, (I hope you don’t mind if I call you Maureen? I blush anytime I write the word, “naked”... lol) This was real, real nice! You know, we’re either thinking of that person we want to be in love with. Or, we’re thinking of that person we are in love with. Or, we are thinking of that person, we used to be in love with... Whew!!! There’s a lot of work involved in this love thang, aint there? Geesh! Maureen, I really liked this poem of yours, Wonderful! Richy |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awesome write M |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Vicky you have been digging deep again I see *s. Thank you for noticing my words. And Richy, you may call me Maureen...I can see where the nakd part may make you blush  Hey, maybe I am writing about one I once loved, and still love or maybe even hope to love again..that's the fun of words...they can make you wonder Thanks Dixie M |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
nakdthoughts - always your words say of you. I love your new photo by the way, does you well... BC |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Maureen, your words flow like music. Keth Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
Good write, of course you know i can relate. A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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apoetdreams Member
since 2003-06-01
Posts 52NJ, USA |
This is a wonderful poem. It touches the senses in a way all great poem do. Thank you. Make your words as sweet as honey, someday you may have to eat them. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
I'm holding plans to spring alive a list of such, a balance sheet. Reminding me of faith in dreams reaching for the real, complete. Time is always on my side, though aging still, another year. A touch of warmth, I feel inside when comfort calls and you appear. I've chiseled points, unmasked the hide, denial not a word to fear. The softness rises when you stride and eyes of mine rest on yours, near. This part especially stood out..... Reminding me of faith in dreams reaching for the real, complete. Thank you for allowing us to read another perfect poem of yours.  Hugs,  Ethel |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
vandana, I appreciate your visits Bill, thanks. I took that picture on a day I felt I looked more like myself although no matter how much I smiled those turned out bad..so I am serious in this one but feel good about it.Kethry, thanks bslicker, thanks Bernie. Probably there are many who can relate. M apoetdreams, what a nice thing to say, Thank you garysgirl, I must have been dreaming when I thought this poem up I don't even remember writing it hugsssss Ethel M |
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