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Margherita
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0 posted 2003-06-01 05:56 AM


    

A brand new song


My eyes I set on you
rose in fullest splendor
mingling my breath with yours
and in the very moment
of this mutual touch of life
time stopped and hope dispersed,
voiceless I witnessed your burst.

One by one your petals
danced their final dance
swaying ever so softly
they did not land on the floor
no, they steered to my very core
they hit my heart of marble
and made it bleed to death.

Oh the pain of disintegration!
No one will ever compare to you.
My tears fell on the velvety remains
to remind you forever of the dew
that once had caressed you,
tell me, will you remember me,
my Love, as I remember you?

The morning after I still breathe
how comes I survived once more?
Have you come to visit in my dreams?
My heart awakens to a new sun
and in the corner of my eyes
a new bud’s beauty I recognize,
ready to sing a brand new song.
Love, Margherita


[This message has been edited by Margherita (06-01-2003 01:09 PM).]

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JamesMichael
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1 posted 2003-06-01 07:46 AM


Beautiful...Margherita can you dance the Macarena?   James
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2 posted 2003-06-01 07:56 AM


Oh the pain of disintegration!
No one will ever compare to you.
My tears fell on the velvety remains
to remind you forever of the dew
that once had caressed you,
tell me, will you remember me,
my Love, as I remember you?

The morning after I still breathe
how comes I survived once more?
Have you come to visit in my dreams?
My heart awakens to a new sun
and in the corner of my eyes
a new bud’s beauty I recognize,
ready to sing a brand new song.
Love, Margherita


What a beautiful lov poem this morning, Lady.
Thank you for sharing it with us.  
Hugs,  
Ethel


Margherita
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3 posted 2003-06-01 08:36 AM


Dear James thank you .... you are right ... why not dance? I love to dance, and even if I'm not a champion I still enjoy it!
Macarena? Yees ...  


Dear Ethel, thank you dear, we are riding the same waves, aren't we? And after a passing moment of tears ..... the sun shines again.

Much love to both. Margherita

NewEnglandlazurlu
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4 posted 2003-06-01 10:41 AM


Oh sweet lady, this was so smooooth and I loved it.

Your writing is wonderful.

Huggles, Marti

Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 2003-06-01 10:55 AM


Margherita
Every morning is a new song, enjoyed.

Sunshine
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6 posted 2003-06-01 11:01 AM





Perhaps before the storm
your petals resembled this...
a bit of peace from my garden
sent with a sisterly kiss...

Hugs, Margherita!


Margherita
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7 posted 2003-06-01 11:23 AM


Dear Marti, Seymour and Karilea thank you for reading and commenting. Yes Karilea EXACTLY! The full maturity of the rose! It's a fragile moment. Sometimes they rest on the stem and dry there, but in other moments they just sort of collapse .... as it may happen with relationships.
Much love, Margherita

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8 posted 2003-06-01 09:28 PM




(smiles) Yay! Oh Margherita, this really made me smile imagining another rose blooming and singing another new song after this song! (kiss on cheek) May spring always shine in your heart, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Margherita, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

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