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A brand new song
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A brand new song |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity 
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 A brand new song My eyes I set on you rose in fullest splendor mingling my breath with yours and in the very moment of this mutual touch of life time stopped and hope dispersed, voiceless I witnessed your burst. One by one your petals danced their final dance swaying ever so softly they did not land on the floor no, they steered to my very core they hit my heart of marble and made it bleed to death. Oh the pain of disintegration! No one will ever compare to you. My tears fell on the velvety remains to remind you forever of the dew that once had caressed you, tell me, will you remember me, my Love, as I remember you? The morning after I still breathe how comes I survived once more? Have you come to visit in my dreams? My heart awakens to a new sun and in the corner of my eyes a new bud’s beauty I recognize, ready to sing a brand new song. Love, Margherita [This message has been edited by Margherita (06-01-2003 01:09 PM).] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Beautiful...Margherita can you dance the Macarena? James |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Oh the pain of disintegration! No one will ever compare to you. My tears fell on the velvety remains to remind you forever of the dew that once had caressed you, tell me, will you remember me, my Love, as I remember you? The morning after I still breathe how comes I survived once more? Have you come to visit in my dreams? My heart awakens to a new sun and in the corner of my eyes a new bud’s beauty I recognize, ready to sing a brand new song. Love, Margherita What a beautiful lov poem this morning, Lady. Thank you for sharing it with us.  Hugs,  Ethel |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear James thank you .... you are right ... why not dance? I love to dance, and even if I'm not a champion I still enjoy it! Macarena? Yees ...  Dear Ethel, thank you dear, we are riding the same waves, aren't we? And after a passing moment of tears ..... the sun shines again. Much love to both. Margherita  |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Oh sweet lady, this was so smooooth and I loved it. Your writing is wonderful. Huggles, Marti |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Margherita Every morning is a new song, enjoyed. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
 Perhaps before the storm your petals resembled this... a bit of peace from my garden sent with a sisterly kiss... Hugs, Margherita!  |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Marti, Seymour and Karilea thank you for reading and commenting. Yes Karilea EXACTLY! The full maturity of the rose! It's a fragile moment. Sometimes they rest on the stem and dry there, but in other moments they just sort of collapse .... as it may happen with relationships. Much love, Margherita |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Yay! Oh Margherita, this really made me smile imagining another rose blooming and singing another new song after this song! (kiss on cheek) May spring always shine in your heart, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Margherita, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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