Open Poetry #26 |
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Nobody Is Perfect |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA ![]() |
If everybody was perfect They would never make Not one mistake But nobody is perfect Nobody can expect Them to ever be Nobody is perfect Why can't people Just deal with that Nobody will ever be perfect Until the day God Makes us that way So until that time comes Which is far away Just know this That nobody will ever be perfect Until that day Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Tis a true saying Julie, nobody is perfert - although I come closer than most *Grin. Good poem Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Julie? May I? Seems you inspired me a bit: There is no one that's perfect-pressed, for we are one and the same. The fault we find with others is the voice of our own shame. Hearthugs, lady. We are the all better for your words. |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
Very true. LOL at Kethry Marilyn. |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Thank you all for your comments. Sometimes I just get mad when some of the members here expect you to write poems at their level. But like I say nobody is perfect at anything. Especially poetry. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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ThunderMage Senior Member
since 2002-06-20
Posts 812Canada |
And those people are at a low level simply because they keep labelling everyone by some level when poetry is about expression not competition. ![]() What is life without poetry and adventure? |
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Nightshade![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Julie, if we didn't make mistakes, we would never learn. Your poetry is lovely - from your heart - that's all that counts. Keep smilin', hugs, Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
I expressed a deep desire to ever perfect be but the voice of God came back it came up close to me How can your perfection reign when others are put down you must learn humility if you would wear a crown And so I found a lesson learned perfection's trail is blazed when in the mirror of our love all other folks are raised. Loved your poem, hope you don't mind the inspire it gave me. Keth Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown [This message has been edited by Kethry (05-31-2003 10:24 PM).] |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
God didn't make us perfect...He made us just beautiful...well done Julie.. believe in what your heart feels... |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Thank you one and all for your comments and poems inspired by mine. I consider you all friends Cold hands means a warm heart |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (sigh) So very true, dearest friend, I myself am not perfect and admit I have made mistakes, and you do too, but nevertheless you can be as close to perfect as you can and that is a blessing! (big hugggssssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Julie, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Julie, I wrote a poem called "She Wondered If She Belonged Amongst The Giants". Of course, the "she" in it is "me". I wrote it when I was thinking that people may be getting tired of reading about me and Gary all the time. But, do you know what? I seem to be able to write the love poems about us better because I feel them in my heart...and it's the happiest part of my life. I have found that as long as you write from your heart, there will be people who like to read your poems. We can only write the way we write...not the way others write. Besides, it wouldn't be very interesting if everyone wrote exactly alike, would it? I think I'll repost that poem just for you. Maybe you can relate to it. Remember that the "she" in the poem is actually "me". (I just noticed that another one of mine is on the front now, so I'll probably post it tomorrow.) Heart hugs to you, Julie ![]() Ethel [This message has been edited by garysgirl (06-01-2003 09:51 PM).] |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Thank you very much! I chased this perfection demon for years...illusive demon, it is. Conclusion: Do the best you can, that's all you can do. Now I am satisfied in the fact that I will never achieve perfection. We all fall short of the glory because of our humaness. Good Write, Good Thoughts, Patricia |
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