Open Poetry #26 |
Reading |
eminor_angel Member
since 2003-05-22
Posts 323Canada |
Reading the obsessive pages spiral, spin, revolve (she says she turns them) twisting the words words words around her evolved mind her addiction her prozac her entertainment all for the low price of a servile life but that will never sell she doesn’t care plucks another sentence And wraps it around her rapture |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Wow! This reads like a picture of my early life and my escape from it. Well done. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
"...plucks another sentence And wraps it around her rapture" Ahhhhh, the imagery! Love it! |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Wonderful !! Enjoyed. Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
nice write, I liked it alot |
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