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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2003-05-31 05:53 PM


Sugar Is Sweet

Growing weary
of drinking
my coffee
black.

Sugar is
Sweet.

I want my
baby back.

JamesLee
May31
2003
Don't
WeAll.

© Copyright 2003 JamesMichael - All Rights Reserved
the_loner_23
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Jacksonville, Florida, USA
1 posted 2003-05-31 05:56 PM


This is a sad write. But one day if you keep trying your baby will come back.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Marilyn
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since 1999-09-26
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Ontario, Canada
2 posted 2003-05-31 07:21 PM


Ohhh this was so sad with only a few words.

Marilyn.

SEA
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with you
3 posted 2003-05-31 08:47 PM


(((hugs)))
yes, with few words you conveyed such sadness....

Margherita
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4 posted 2003-05-31 08:49 PM


James I love this and I don't think its so sad really .... you have the power to make her come back. BE the sugar!
Love, Margherita

Bill Charles
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5 posted 2003-05-31 08:51 PM


James - a'hhhh my friend, sugar is sure sweet...

BC

passing shadows
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6 posted 2003-06-01 02:31 AM


maybe it's time for some new flavors?
Mistletoe Angel
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7 posted 2003-06-01 09:04 PM




(big hugggsssssssss) And may love soon be the new French Vanilla or Hazelbut flavor in your coffee and always leave that taste in your mouth! (sad sigh) This is sadly beautiful, sweet friend, I send angel hugs your way, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

Patricia
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8 posted 2003-06-01 09:57 PM


I have to agree with Noah...many new delightful flavors to choose from, James.  Sample some if you are so inclined.

Patricia  

JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
9 posted 2003-06-02 06:55 AM


Thank you the loner, Marilyn, Sea, Margherita, Bill, passing shadows, Noah and Patricia...
Sometimes yo have no choice...but I'm hoping this time I do...If not I definately am willing to try a new flavor...James

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