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The Moon And You
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The Moon And You |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now 
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“THE MOON AND YOU” by Bill Charles ~~~~ In a forest quiet among the giant redwoods, moonlight appears on a bed of their needles, a soft breeze sings harmony, quietly longing, faeries dance seductively with minstrels… A time remembered dancing alone, as I gazed, when you twirled compelling in the moonlight, enchanted were my eyes to see you in ballet, mysterious is how you move me, how you excite… Shadows make love to embracing moonbeams, thoughts of mine are to exchange their place, perhaps the moon and you in devilish guile, when softness of lips kiss upon my face… ~~~~ |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This was so beautiful. I loved it. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ooooh Bill...so romantic...so beautiful! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Bill, the moonlight does wonderous things...great poem.. believe in what your heart feels... |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
you do romantic so beautifully....  |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Bill...They say great minds think alike. Your poem is so beautiful, full of moonbeams and romantic enchantments. Nocturnal enchantments that beguile and bewitch. Wonderfully romantic writing as always... ***Ivy Rose |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Always enjoy your work Bill - This one is no exception  JThere is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
this is so romantic the moon is even flushed  Lovely write poet sir...the imagery is wonderful. Im still imagining your voice ... |
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Dreamless Decay Junior Member
since 2003-05-30
Posts 13MO |
wow..made me forget I was in a bad mood for a bit, think I'll read it again "Looking over your shoulder fleeing from The Reaper...Look closer seeing only your own reflection in a puddle of rain." |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
ah, yes |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
DearBill you transport the reader in a world of magic. Just beautiful! Love, Margherita ... another moonchild! |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Bill, who's been sprinkling you with faerie dust? This whimsy suits you. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Awwwwwwwwww, this is beautifully spellbinding, sweet friend, what makes love most enchanting is how it seems to swallow the shadows and make them caricatures , dancing across the gardens and the horizons! (big hugggssssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is mesmerizing, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Yep, Mr. Romance himself!! This is such a beautiful poem, Bill. I love the moonlit poems. "To be in love with love is truly to love".....by Paladin |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
And so, Bill, I closed my eyes after reading each stanza...oh, so beautiful a story your words paint. I had to read it again in the same way...it was even more beautiful the second time around. Patricia |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Bill: my oh my - I have been away too long . . . this is amazing . . . smiling - good to see you smiling too xxoo |
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apoetdreams Member
since 2003-06-01
Posts 52NJ, USA |
Very romantic and awe inspiring!  Make your words as sweet as honey, someday you may have to eat them. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Hey Bill You certainly haven't lost your romantic touch....This is lovely! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Smooth as silk...James |
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