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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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It’s not that I don’t love you no baby, it’s that I love you....too much and it’s in this time I ache oh, I ache for your touch to the point my soul becomes numb I can’t fight these emotions and so it is I succumb.... reality blurs to half fragments there is no clarity you are all consuming the very doom of me..... I’ve given in to giving myself to you still...... always..... again..... ~SEA~ |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
you are all consuming the very doom of me..... SEA - been there....felt this...thankyou for sharing these thoughts with us. hugs, Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I know how that feels....trying to fight it even now |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) I guess it's all in the moderation of passion to where we can find comfort, dearest friend, love truly is an amazing force and we can't help but contain it sometimes! (big hugggsssssssss) You speak of the dilemma of love so well, dearest friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Yes, and is that prefered or a a pain...James |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
very nice write,, i enjoyed  It's the quality of the complement that i feel, not the quanity. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA~ So GOOD to see you, gal~ Beautiful, as always~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Aw yes, but when you give in it's very nice isn't it......You know like the Bellamy Brothers sang...."Let Your Love Flow" Nice write! |
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Dreamless Decay Junior Member
since 2003-05-30
Posts 13MO |
Chances are all of us knows that feeling...but it was fun to read "Looking over your shoulder fleeing from The Reaper...Look closer seeing only your own reflection in a puddle of rain." |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Sea...This is beautiful, heartfelt writing. You've so eloquently expressed what so many of us have felt about the person we are in love with. ***Ivy Rose |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
SEA - nice to see you. You do write with a soft touch that just has your words give thoughts of your feelings... BC |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Susan...I know this feeling only too well. Enjoyed reading you ...miss you! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
to giving myself to you still...... always..... again..... Oh yes, Sea...I do know this. I enjoyed reading you again. You've been missed very much, Lady. Glad you're back. Hugs, :hugs; Ethel |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
You are just way too good at this! Sure do miss that about ya.  |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
thank you all very much... and there is my Cowboy  have missed you |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
love the surrender in this gem of pen Sea-girlie...cool font too. So glad to see you been finding some time to write in between sod, meatloaf and bread  LOLIm still imagining your voice ... |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Susan, ============================================= I’ve given in to giving myself to you still...... always..... again..... ============================================= Can I pretend you're writing for me? Such incredible thoughts wrapped into such a fine package. How I've missed your writing... If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
beautiful heartmoving penned.glad to catch your name once again dear friend (((warm hugs))) Charisma |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I'm just so danged glad to see you back...that now I'll have to go back and read the poem... Hugs, Mom |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
Very beautifully wrote. A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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