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Point of Start
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Point of Start There is no point that I can start And no start that I can point For I must fly upon my art And hope a common will anoint. It seems a circle with a rhyme Subject to a pressure gage Played upon a visible time Upon an ever changing stage No top or bottom that I see Not visible is its core At least it seems that way to me A wave that rides to evermore And the shore seems to oscillate Deposited and dragged away Vacillate and permeate Settles but it does not stay How can we point a point of start? It is surely beyond our art. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Good Morning Sy! Wonderful words this morn... there is beyond a doubt no beginning and no end to your wonderful words of rhyme. Much enjoyed this morning's read. ~Hugs & tea, Nancy~  ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Hey, now, that point wouldn't be a circle, would it? Or is the chicken looking at the egg? Whatever it be...it's sweet poetry. Good morning Sy!  |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Hey Sy Like Chapin's "all my life's a circle" Great reasoning my friend. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Seek not a starting point, my dear Sonneteer! Life is a circle and there is no beginning and there is no end. You really are so incredibly special! You have a fine mind, a quick wit, and a talent oh, so rare.  Have a glorious day, my friend, Linda |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Nice work, Not quite a sonnet, but it is in your recognizable style, Which you do so well. I also heard sounds of the song by H. Chapin Rolling round my skull. Enjoyed Gloom |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Seymour - Thoughts to ponder once more dear poet. You are amazing! Butter tart hugs to you on this sunny Canadian morn. Chris  "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nancy, You are a delight,  Sunshine, Whatever you are my sunshine, kiss: ethome Thank you, always a pleasure to read your coments. Earth Angel Flattery will get you everywhere, :squeeze; Professor, Always a pleasure to read your comments. Chris, Yummy yummy thank you dear, hugs. vandana Thank you dear. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
There is no point that I can start And no start that I can point For I must fly upon my art And hope a common will anoint. It seems a circle with a rhyme Subject to a pressure gage Played upon a visible time Upon an ever changing stage ====================== And the shore seems to oscillate Deposited and dragged away Vacillate and permeate Settles but it does not stay How can we point a point of start? It is surely beyond our art. =================== Your rhymes are the point of which I start, for your poetry is the art of my heart. (and a really cool place to send *winkies* *L*  Darkness cannot drive out darkness ... only light can do that. |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
There is a cycle to life Sy...and a beautiful circle of creative thoughts to your write...much enjoyed.. believe in what your heart feels... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 wonderful! |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Sey, those last two lines say it all! cor |
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CastleGuard Senior Member
since 2003-04-30
Posts 760Alberta, Canada |
Thinking too hard about this... ...will make my head spin.   Great write, and read. CG |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, Winkiewinkie tink I'm happy what you think. And Randy sends his love too. I may be eratic in my replies, sent my computer back to Emachine they said they would put in a new mother board. It will take about two weeks. I'll answer and post when I can. scorpio, Nice reply, thank you. passing, Thank you for the read and nice reply. cor Thank you sweet. CG, Thank you for the great write. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Certainly it is beyond our art, but not beyond our intuition! (big hugggssssssss) Only you can chart your own progress, dearest friend, make your voyage across these atmospheres, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Thank you Noah. |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Seymour...Your words very concise; yet poignant. This is a very powerful piece. Shows great poetic expertise' ***Ivy Rose |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ivy Rose Thank you so much for the read and like. vandana Thank you dear. |
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