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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2003-05-31 08:32 AM


Worlds of Eternity

I live within a moment’s be
Each moment an eternity
It seems a moment out of sync
Perhaps it is the thought I think.

Each moment seems a world its own
Each moment sits its own a throne
And stays within my very soul
To play a part within my goal

Each moment stands upon a stone
A body structure like my bone
Put together they could be
My sail upon an unknown sea

Yet I cannot make the logic work
It bothers me until I irk
And all the parts become a storm
Until there form are far from norm

But this is but a thought my friend
And will not help you in the end.

© Copyright 2003 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2003-05-31 08:54 AM


Sy, having a ying-yang sort of day?
May the butterflies come out to play?
Might we sit beyond yon tree,
with our poets, and sip some tea?




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2 posted 2003-05-31 08:57 AM


Seymour~
Saturday morning is special ... with you in it~

'My sail upon an unknown sea'

Ahhhhhhhhh, this sets my poetic heart adrift~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 2003-05-31 08:59 AM


Sunshine
An excellent idea,

Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 2003-05-31 09:01 AM


Marge,
A for you my love.

scorpio
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5 posted 2003-05-31 09:11 AM


Thought provoking message this morning Sy...we each have our own moments..

believe in what your heart feels...

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6 posted 2003-05-31 09:15 AM


Each moment stands upon a stone
A body structure like my bone
Put together they could be
My sail upon an unknown sea


'Morning Seymour  

If this is "just a thought" and
"won't help me"? I still love it,
my friend. Your thoughts are real
treasures to us, you know.
             
Hugs to you,
Ethel



Patricia
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7 posted 2003-05-31 09:16 AM


Seymour,

Sometimes, it helps just to simply walk away (not just with legs, but with your mind...a most difficult task for me.)  Then you come back with a fresh perspective and a clear mind, and sometimes, just sometimes the pieces seem to fall right into place.

Beautifully written as always,
Patricia

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8 posted 2003-05-31 09:32 AM


Excellent morning read today Sy!
Wonderful words to ponder over morning tea.
Just brewed a pot..come join me?
~Morning hugs and tea, Nancy Lee~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Tim
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9 posted 2003-05-31 09:39 AM


To think a thought
is all we got,
But some with thoughts,
Done got a lots,
Take Seymour Tabin,
Who takes you in,
With pleasing rhyme,
Most everytime,
To share his thoughts,
A lot he gots.

Fine read on a cool and breezy Kansas morn Mr. Tabin.

ethome
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10 posted 2003-05-31 09:43 AM


"Each moment stands upon a stone
A body structure like my bone
Put together they could be
My sail upon an unknown sea"

Ah yes, yes, lovely words and meaning, spoken in true Syber style!  Very nice!

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11 posted 2003-05-31 10:28 AM


Seymour - Living in the moment...that is just what I am learning how to....just "be."
Love this rainy Saturday morning read.
Enchantress..get out the extra teapot...I am inviting all our poet friends to sit with Seymour and chat!! I'll rustle up some goodies to munch on and we will share our hopes and dreams. Sound good to you Seymour? Okie dokie! hugs, Chris

Seymour Tabin
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12 posted 2003-05-31 10:28 AM


Thank you scorpio.

Ethel
I think your due for your angel wings,

Patricia
Yes, I've heard that before, thank you.

Nancy,
The pleasure is mine,

Tim
Enjoyed the reply, LOL

ethome,
Thank you my friend.

Seymour Tabin
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13 posted 2003-05-31 10:31 AM


Chris,
Okie dokie, I'll saddle up Old Randy and be righ over,

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14 posted 2003-05-31 10:32 AM


Each moment stands upon a stone
A body structure like my bone
Put together they could be
My sail upon an unknown sea


Yet I cannot make the logic work
It bothers me until I irk
And all the parts become a storm
Until there form are far from norm

But this is but a thought my friend

And will not help you in the end.

wanna bet? *L*
wanna winkie


Each moment stands upon a stone
A body structure like my bone
Put together they could be
My sail upon an unknown sea



could that verse be any cooler.!!!!


Im still imagining your voice ...
can see the sparkle in your eyes.
I cant explain your power over me
Its understated understood & beautiful.
cj

Margherita
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Eternity
15 posted 2003-05-31 11:15 AM


Dear Seymour I love your words. Thoughts dancing wildly and not gathering logically it seems, but it's the dance of life. And each thought is part of your world of eternity.
Beautiful!
Love, Margherita

Seymour Tabin
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16 posted 2003-05-31 01:15 PM


JM,
A winkie would be great and I think Randy would like one too. WWRS Kiss:


Margherita
Thank you for the beautiful,

passing shadows
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17 posted 2003-05-31 01:30 PM


love the ending, as always
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18 posted 2003-05-31 01:52 PM


Tinks been playing in your ink



  

and one for Randy too


Nan
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19 posted 2003-05-31 02:00 PM


Each moment IS a world unto itself, Sy... Nice write...
Seymour Tabin
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20 posted 2003-05-31 02:46 PM


JM,
Now isn't that a dainty link to make of someones ink? WWRS

Nan,
I know love,

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21 posted 2003-05-31 04:41 PM






(smiles) Is this your fine vessal, she's a sure beauty! (big hugggsssssss) Live each moment like there's no tomorrow they say, embrace each new facet of the world you encounter, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

Seymour Tabin
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22 posted 2003-05-31 05:22 PM


Noah,
Didn't think there were any pictures of the boat. LOL

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