Open Poetry #26 |
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Panning Gold |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla ![]() |
Panning Gold I sail a river in my dreams Without a crew or so it seems Passing shadows on the shore Under moonlights silver awe And the wind that fills my sails Whispers lovely fairy tales Making music in the lines Dancing figures of opine. I hold the ship on steady course Using very little force Sailing into awesome skies Down a rivers wiles and sighs Yet I know my eyes are closed And I am sleeping unexposed Still the dream is full of real And the pleasure feels ideal. It’s so that treasure fills my goal And lends surcease my very soul. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Good afternoon, Mr. T.! May you sail the rivers of your days as smoothly and as wondrously as you sail the rivers of your dreams. ![]() This was lovely. Sweet dreams forevermore... EA |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel Comming from an angel I feel there is now hope. ![]() |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh such wonderfully poetic words from you today Sy! And, I was afraid I had missed you.. but here you are...I'll put the kettle back on. ~Afternoon hugs & tea, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Beautiful words Sy |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nancy, Thank you sweet, ![]() Aenimal Thank you for the read and good word. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Under moonlights silver awe ==================== yesssssss.... exactly. ![]() Making music in the lines Dancing figures of opine. Sailing into awesome skies Down a rivers wiles and sighs could your couplets be any cooler? ![]() me thinks not and yet each day you top your coolness. *L* your rhymes are worth the wait, even when youre a tad late. *L* *winkiewinkie* ![]() ![]() ![]() |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, Yes I am a tad late, Had a doctors appointment, in fact had two close together And I just seem to be running around in circles. But circles can be fun. WWRS ![]() ![]() ![]() |
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Nightshade![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Afternoon Seymour! An awesome, golden write to-day. Banana muffin? Okie Dokie. hugs to you my poet friend, Chris ![]() "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Can I float your boat? LOL... seemed MOST appropriate!!! ![]() ![]() Thank you Sy, for the slipsong read... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Chris, Thank you, ![]() Sunshine, You can do most anythng with me. ![]() |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Silky smooth...did you find any gold...James |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JamesMichael Yes, but not the kind you can spend. LOL |
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Mysteria![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
You should never sail alone, C'mon Sy pick up the phone. Call me I will sail with you, No Isabel, just us two ![]() [This message has been edited by Mysteria (05-28-2003 04:34 PM).] |
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Mysteria![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
opps I double-clicked but then again - reading you twice is kinda nice [This message has been edited by Mysteria (05-28-2003 04:35 PM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awesome! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Mysteria It's a date, LOL ![]() passing, Thanks for passing, ![]() |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Seymour, I do love your dreams. Please never quit sharing them with us. ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Ethel |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ethel, I'll try, ![]() |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (smiles) Hope your cruise lately has been a mighty fine one, dearest friend, looks like soon we'll be stopping on the dry tortugas on the fair maiden voyage onward! (big hugggssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is just lovely, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Noah, Thank you my friend. |
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