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Open Poetry #26

Desires

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

0 posted 2003-05-30 03:29 PM

~
love
is rejoicing
with jubilant feelings
with each kiss we share
i surrender to your desires
embrace me softly
reach out
Yes?
~

[This message has been edited by QjQ (05-30-2003 03:48 PM).]

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

1 posted 2003-05-30 04:01 PM

QjQ, this is so pretty.
I really liked it.
Hugs

Ethel

JilGirl
Member

since 2003-05-24

Posts 364
Washington

2 posted 2003-05-30 05:02 PM

So sweetly written. You should only receive a "yes" answer with this one! You express yourself so well, within the frame of a few select words! Bravo!

Blessings!
Shirl

Till oceans cease to flow and deserts lose their sands, may beauty surround you every day and wealth be in your hands.

Dreamless Decay
Junior Member

since 2003-05-30

Posts 13
MO

3 posted 2003-05-30 06:02 PM

I must say it was short but it was pleasant.

"Looking over your shoulder fleeing from The Reaper...Look closer seeing only your own reflection in a puddle of rain."

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2003-05-30 07:31 PM

yes! wonderful!

whiskey

Senior Member

since 1999-12-28

Posts 1278
Australia

5 posted 2003-05-30 08:50 PM

Very nice indeed, I like this alot

Julie

"Dont cry because its over, smile because it happened. "

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