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Decayed Dreams
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Decayed Dreams |
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Dreamless Decay Junior Member
since 2003-05-30
Posts 13MO |
Everlasting shadows of the night, Happiness slipping further out of sight. Steamroller rollin' in my head, Slowly forget everything you said. The silence is all so fierce, Through my skin it does pierce. Slowly rotting away from this place, Eventually disappear without a trace. Breathe in, breathe out as it seems, World filled with Decaying Dreams. |
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That Voice Junior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 34 |
Hmmmm a very interesting first post, a touch on the macabre, but there are many here that like that sort of thing, don’t worry about the dreams, it’s the voice while you’re awake that’s the rub |
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majnu
since 2002-10-13
Posts 1088SF Bay Area |
Welcome to PIP DD! This dark poem of yours was great, and I look forward to reading more. Make sure to check you e-mail for a special greeting! -majnu |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
dark have been my dreams of late...and so it seems have yours. Welcome to Passions. I hope you feel at home here,I'd like to read more of you. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yeah...sad |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
welcome to pip, interesting write, waiting to see more of your writes,, It's the quality of the complement that i feel, not the quanity. |
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JilGirl Member
since 2003-05-24
Posts 364Washington |
Very good composition. Sad, however. But, none of us escape the dark, while striving for the light! Happy journey and welcome! Blessings! Shirl Till oceans cease to flow and deserts lose their sands, may beauty surround you every day and wealth be in your hands. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (big hugggsssssss) Indeed fate has a way of trying to tear destiny apart, yet if we only contemplate of the possible misfortunes, there is no purpose in breathing so it is worth believing...after all...what do we have to lose in comparison? This is a marvelous debut, sweet friend, God Bless You! Welcome to Passions, sweet Kyle, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kyle, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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