Open Poetry #26 |
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Midnight Reading |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Lost in a moment between written words I pause with the thinking the lines impart, The sound in my ears echoes what was heard And dives deep to the center of my heart. Can I still hear you? No, heard nevermore, Nothing I can do None I can implore, I just continue reading your letter, Emotions that you express there so plain, The reading did not make me feel better, The memories can’t ease the loss or pain. Gloom |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I always really enjoy your writing, this has such an ache to it....so glad I got a chance this morning to sneak in here and find it... ![]() |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Thank you, Sea, I also am pleased you were able to sneak in and find my words a pleasure. Gloom |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I've received letters such as this... you derive the feelings and lay them plain but if you have never received one I don't know if the thunk can be recalled or the deep emptiness they leave within... sometimes, it does take experience... thank you, Sir. |
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Nightshade![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Tugs at my heartstrings this does. Well written piece yet again Gloom. Chris ![]() "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very heartfelt write Gloom... Extremely well written and much enjoyed. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Beautifully written. Brought tears to my eyes. Reminds me of the last letter I got from my ex Greg. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Experience that is shared, ripples out like the water in a clear lake. Enjoyed the thoughtfulness of your write. TD |
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