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the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

0 posted 2003-05-30 12:47 PM

The music of a heartbeat
Can be of many sounds
It can be the thunder
Clapping in the distance
Or a pounding of a drum

The music of a heartbeat
Can sound like an angel singing
Or of an angel playing a harp
Up in heaven for you

The music of a heartbeat
Can sound like a lover
That whispers
Sweet nothings in your ear

The music of a heartbeat
Can sound like many things
But one thing it proves
Is the love you may be in

Cold hands means a warm heart

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2003-05-30 01:02 PM

Julie~
I think this is one of your prettiest pennings~

'The music of a heartbeat
Can sound like many things
But one thing it proves
Is the love you may be in'

PERFECTLY TRUE~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

2 posted 2003-05-30 01:15 PM

Very nice Julie - enjoyed. Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....

-Emily Dickinson

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2003-05-30 01:25 PM

wonderful Julie

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

4 posted 2003-05-30 02:11 PM

Julie,
You have grown so much in your poetry, and this is one of your prettiest pennings...as Marge so aptly said. Very nice. TD

ThunderMage
Senior Member

since 2002-06-20

Posts 812
Canada

5 posted 2003-05-30 02:30 PM

It proves the love I'm in with you Julie.

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!
We do not stop playing because we grow ol

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

6 posted 2003-05-30 02:33 PM

Julie, I think this is my favorite one
of all your poems I've read. Maybe
because Gary and I can relate so much to
it?? Anyway, this part is especially beautiful....

The music of a heartbeat
Can sound like many things
But one thing it proves
Is the love you may be in

Hugs to you and Liam

Ethel

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

7 posted 2003-05-30 02:53 PM

great write!!!

gMt

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