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My Heart Attempts To Fly
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My Heart Attempts To Fly |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia 
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 We walk along the sand Beneath the swaying palms I feel your love surround me As I'm held within your arms The clouds drift by so slowly As the waves lap the shore Your love is such a treasure There's so much yet to explore I declare my love for you As the sun starts sinking low You mean the world to me More than you will ever know The gulls take wing in flight As the sun ignites the sky And as you move your lips to mine My heart attempts to fly * * * "When I'm falling in love no safety net is required" I am in motion |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This is so beautiful. Reminds me of me and Liam when we first meet. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Sue this is very loving What a romantic scene you’ve portrayed "When I'm falling in love no safety net is required" I like that. With love, comes trust. So very nice Sue, Such a gentle balmy feel... Richy [This message has been edited by Richy (05-30-2003 05:16 AM).] |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Great graphics and a beautiful romantic poem! Good writing Sue |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
another awesome presentation! |
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quatro Member
since 2003-04-29
Posts 392Galveston, Texas |
Sue, You love and compasion never ceases to amaze me. I enjoyed every word. Naome |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Suetang - may your heart fly with the love in this poem... BC |
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Bec Member
since 2001-02-23
Posts 475Canberra |
Hi Suetang... This is just gorgeous. I can't think of any other way to describe it. I love the way it flows, it's just beautiful. Just wondering, did you write the poem to suit the picture, or did you find the picture afterward? Bec  "Poetry and Hums aren't things which you get, they're things which get you. And all you can do is to go where they can find you." |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
Sue - very romantic and a nice read - Paul |
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bslicker 
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
very good sue :0 A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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Edder Senior Member
since 2003-04-02
Posts 671 |
simply beautiful. what a wonderful write. |
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El_Campeador Senior Member
since 2003-01-29
Posts 761Ohio, USA |
"Your love is such a treasure There's so much yet to explore" Excellent! It will take your entire life to explore it... “We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Sue, this is beautiful, sweet friend, and your heart truly can fly with your gorgeous poetry, yay! (kiss on cheek) May you always find your grace in love lifting you up to the heavens, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice |
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