Open Poetry #26 |
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Love of an Angel (From open poetry #22) |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA ![]() |
He thought he would never Know what love was He was dumped by so many girls It was unbelievable He didn't do nothing to them They just didn't like the way he looked He was too thin His teeth were crooked His hands were shaky And so on and so forth So he thought I might as well fall off The face of the earth No girl will ever love me But he couldn't stand being alone So he prayed to the good lord above Day and night One day he woke up To a bright light In his room He tried with all his might To see what it was Then the light Faded and he saw the most beautiful angel In the world The angel said, "I am the answer to your prayer." The young man smiled He found the love of an Angel His prayers had been answered Cold hands means a warm heart |
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bslicker![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
oh my such great writing we all have an angel ![]() A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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ThunderMage Senior Member
since 2002-06-20
Posts 812Canada |
The day I met Julie, I knew I had found my angel. What is life without poetry and adventure? |
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Ratleader![]()
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Thanks for resurrecting this....it's good to see, and good to read. I was that kid....and the angel came. She wasn't either (the most beautiful, or an angel), and yet she was. And then I was. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (big hugggsssssssss) Oh my gosh, this is soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I have many dreams like this almost every night, and still wait for my dream girl to come down from the heavens! (sigh) This is beautiful, sweet friend, I love this, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Julie, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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