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the_loner_23
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0 posted 2003-06-06 02:35 PM


He thought he would never
Know what love was
He was dumped by so many girls
It was unbelievable

He didn't do nothing to them
They just didn't like the way he looked
He was too thin
His teeth were crooked
His hands were shaky
And so on and so forth

So he thought
I might as well fall off
The face of the earth
No girl will ever love me

But he couldn't stand being alone
So he prayed to the good lord above
Day and night

One day he woke up
To a bright light
In his room
He tried with all his might
To see what it was
Then the light
Faded and he saw the most beautiful angel
In the world

The angel said, "I am the answer to your prayer."
The young man smiled
He found the love of an
Angel
His prayers had been answered

Cold hands means a warm heart

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1 posted 2003-06-06 02:46 PM


oh my
such great writing
we all have an angel

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

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2 posted 2003-06-06 05:32 PM


The day I met Julie, I knew I had found my angel.

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!
We do not stop playing because we grow ol

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3 posted 2003-06-07 07:03 PM


Thanks for resurrecting this....it's good to see, and good to read.

I was that kid....and the angel came. She wasn't either (the most beautiful, or an angel), and yet she was. And then I was.

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4 posted 2003-06-07 07:13 PM




(big hugggsssssssss) Oh my gosh, this is soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I have many dreams like this almost every night, and still wait for my dream girl to come down from the heavens! (sigh) This is beautiful, sweet friend, I love this, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Julie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

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