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No Longer Friends
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No Longer Friends |
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ladypisces76 Junior Member
since 2003-05-16
Posts 10Maine,USA |
I need to tell you that it has to end I don't think I can go back to being your friend. We went to far we went to fast I always thought in the end it would last. But I can see my loves not returned it was all in my fantasy for you I have learned. Don't feel bad that you don't love me what's meant to be was meant to be. You have a home and a might as well be called a wife just promise me you will have a happy life. |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
yes love must be received as well as given, nice write telling it like it is, gMt |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This poem is so true. i know from experience. I loved this poem. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I'd say you're right on with this write...enjoyable. |
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JilGirl Member
since 2003-05-24
Posts 364Washington |
Often saying goodbye takes exceptional strength. You've shown great strength here! Till oceans cease to flow and deserts lose their sands, may beauty surround you every day and wealth be in your hands. |
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carol Senior Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 624Florida USA |
very nice write and well said Real friends celebrate in who we are and have faith in all that we can become |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yeah, I know this well |
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