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Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

0 posted 2003-05-14 04:02 PM

Despair has claws
and my soul is easy skin
for them to slice through.

You could hurt me with your bare hands. You could hurt me using the sharp edge of what you say. JEWEL

QjQ
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since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

1 posted 2003-05-14 04:06 PM

short with good thoughts, i liked it!

It matters not how you answer, It matters only that i hear you.

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

2 posted 2003-05-14 04:37 PM

That didn't take long to read, but I think the vision is going to stay with me a while.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

Marilyn
Member Elite

since 1999-09-26

Posts 2621
Ontario, Canada

3 posted 2003-05-14 07:12 PM

Oh how I could feel these few words. Well done.

Marilyn

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

4 posted 2003-05-14 08:58 PM

amen

Moonlight Romeo

Senior Member

since 2001-09-10

Posts 982
The heart of you

5 posted 2003-05-15 08:53 AM

Then, comes the healing.

Thank you.

Peace is the only battle worth waging.
--- Albert Camus

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

6 posted 2003-05-15 09:20 AM

Temptress, a lot said in so few words.
Very well done, Lady.

Hugs,
Ethel

Local Parasite

Member Elite

since 2001-11-05

Posts 2527
Transylconia, Winnipeg

7 posted 2003-05-15 09:35 AM

Despair has claws...
but when they are open,
its palms are soft and warm...

Poets are the unacknowledged legislators of the world.
~Percy Bysshe Shelley

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

8 posted 2003-05-15 12:20 PM

and its arms are a shield
from life
and from silence

(thanks LP)

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JP
Senior Member

since 1999-05-25

Posts 1343
Loomis, CA

9 posted 2003-05-15 12:24 PM

fabulous. Only you could create such depth of feeling and beauty in so few words.

Now I want all the short moods together in one place.... I'll start cutting and pasting because I know there is a earth shattering masterpiece in there...

Yesterday is ash, tomorrow is smoke; only today does the fire burn.
Nil Desperandum, Fata viem invenient

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

10 posted 2003-05-15 12:46 PM

enjoyed

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

11 posted 2003-05-29 08:26 PM

Ah, so it does, and they get sharper with repeated use...

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passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

12 posted 2003-05-30 04:15 AM

yep

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