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Self Disturbance |
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LastMoments Member
since 2003-03-07
Posts 92 |
You take in Let me be your eyes Focus on the pain Tha lies along inside Let me be your lips To cover up your lies Let me make it work Let me criticize Make me find you Make me be aware I traveled guilts arm To be engripped Now here I lie Inside its fist Engulfed in flames Here I fall Here I lay Here I become Now I sit Inside my mind In despair I close my eyes I feel hurt I feel used And in the end I'm still abused I'm still ignored I'm still forgotten I'm the shadow In your dreams I'm the voice Inside your head I'm committment To do wrong I'm the pain Here all along I'm the past You can't forget I'm the cry That rings inside I'm the face you can't forget I'm the one That rings inside |
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ben_pelling Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 59Isle of Wight UK. |
Very nice. I enjoed this very much. keep the exelent work coming. Ben.  |
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carol Senior Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 624Florida USA |
very nice poetry I enjoyed Real friends celebrate in who we are and have faith in all that we can become |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Wonderful piece, it has a sadness ring to it. We all feel like we are the problem at some stage in our lives. Once we work through that feeling we find that we are a good person who deserves everything life can offer. Julie "Dont cry because its over, smile because it happened. " |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
good one |
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