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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2003-05-29 04:35 PM



Windows

Reflecting a dreamer’s face,
Eyes soaring with eagles
Feet and toes giving trees lessons
How to plant roots deep
A voice
Letting loose a song
That will follow the wind

Reflections

© Copyright 2003 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-05-29 04:43 PM


gee this is also terrific,  i can't wait to see # 3 ?

gMt

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2 posted 2003-05-29 05:17 PM


Wow Karilea, keep em coming....I loved #1 and
this goodness I am speechless... absolutely beautiful!

Keeping this and going back to keep #1

Maree

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3 posted 2003-05-29 05:23 PM


Exquisite sweet lady!
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

ethome
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4 posted 2003-05-29 05:25 PM


Oh all those lines in between that can be metaphorically likened to the key words

I'm a songwriter my dear not a poet but I'm trying to learn....You da poet!

The best teachers have the biggest ears

JilGirl
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5 posted 2003-05-29 05:57 PM


Perfectly perfect!
MUCH enjoyed!

Till oceans cease to flow and deserts lose their sands, may beauty surround you every day and wealth be in your hands.

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6 posted 2003-05-29 07:51 PM


Now, I am confused about what one is. But,
it's still pretty.


(me going to see what  #3 says)  

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7 posted 2003-05-30 04:22 AM


I like these a lot
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8 posted 2003-06-17 09:13 PM


These are indeed pleasurable little snippets
of a woman who shines delicately upon us all
each day....  

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