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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Windows Reflecting a dreamer’s face, Eyes soaring with eagles Feet and toes giving trees lessons How to plant roots deep A voice Letting loose a song That will follow the wind Reflections |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
gee this is also terrific, i can't wait to see # 3 ? gMt |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Wow Karilea, keep em coming....I loved #1 and this goodness I am speechless... absolutely beautiful! Keeping this and going back to keep #1 Maree  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Exquisite sweet lady! ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Oh all those lines in between that can be metaphorically likened to the key words I'm a songwriter my dear not a poet but I'm trying to learn....You da poet! The best teachers have the biggest ears |
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JilGirl Member
since 2003-05-24
Posts 364Washington |
Perfectly perfect! MUCH enjoyed! Till oceans cease to flow and deserts lose their sands, may beauty surround you every day and wealth be in your hands. |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Now, I am confused about what one is. But, it's still pretty.  (me going to see what #3 says)   |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I like these a lot |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
These are indeed pleasurable little snippets of a woman who shines delicately upon us all each day.... |
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