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She Did
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She Did |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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He stood in the hallway Studying her in her spare room, With brush in hand, a bend of waist Tendrils of hair curling toward ground Soft sounds of forty-six, forty-seven, forty-eight Matching stroke of hand and whisk of brushthroughhair Wove through the air, Coming across to his hearing, Knowing that when she stood, face flushed red And hair thrown back It would amaze him all over again, That she said "I do." |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
YES!! What a beutiful tender moment,.. Wonderful words of love and thoughts of him still not quite believing his good fortune.. Perfect, and I'm keeping this! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine Excellent write,  |
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El_Campeador Senior Member
since 2003-01-29
Posts 761Ohio, USA |
This poem is a treasure! I'm adding it to my library. “We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
oh *sigh*  such a lovely poetic vignette Kari ... a moment in time penned into a verses keepsake. lovely indeed.   Darkness cannot drive out darkness ... only light can do that. |
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CastleGuard Senior Member
since 2003-04-30
Posts 760Alberta, Canada |
Beautiful...brought time to a standstill. Still amazes me, too. CG |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
*happy sigh* yes this definitely did make time stand still. This is so precious... tender... warming... So beautiful! Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Karilea, this is beautiful and a treasure to keep, too.......  Hugs  Ethel |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
this is a absolute, gMt |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Yahuh! This one sparkled...and left pleasant bubbles on the tongue. TD |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
I love how this made me feel Karilea... made me swoon it did. Maree  |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
 LOVE THIS !!!!! |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Karilea, how do you do it? That was so great! I really love the way you write! Richy |
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