Open Poetry #26 |
Dark Threes |
Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Still in night Although sun shines bright Sees no light A Tercet is any three line poem Eyes closed by seeing Too many sights blind my view The light in now dark the Haiku is the most popular form I now can feel the darkness, seeping, soaking into my being, Need not the sight of brightness, reaching, groping my way along, Pulled by the melody of your song, a touch is more than seeing. The number three is a popular number in poetry Gloom |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Three blessings... |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Soft morn light Shadows movement slight Day's invite Glistening in morn Brings a smile to the sadness Kept locked up inside Breaking away from rusted dreams that please to tease the night. Awaiting words of mended seams that ease and appease the eyes Seeing through the darkness of you, drawn to each morning's invite. M |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Professor, As ever, thank you for teaching us more. I liked all three presented, however, the last one touches deeply. Enjoyed, and if you celebrate, happy holiday...Hugs Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. "Desiderata" [This message has been edited by regards2you (04-18-2003 12:35 PM).] |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
---and that is why you are our "Professor"!!! Thank you, dear teacher and sharer of your own fine poetic works! Love & Light, Linda |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wonderful lessons! thank you for sharing! |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
i enjoyied this one |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
nice job! |
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