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River Run Through Me
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River Run Through Me |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York 
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The river runs through me jeweled renewed drowning allowing me I can finally be what I see in the mirrored reflection of the river that runs back to me [This message has been edited by littlewing (04-19-2003 07:16 AM).] |
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secretlife Member
since 2002-07-30
Posts 359Grean Earth ,,, |
Nice words.. Keep writting.. Hugssssss Secretlife You Are My End Secret Life... |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Self awareness... well said through your words...  |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Seems that you've spent a some time in a calming place, within and without. |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
I always find joy in introspection; not everyone has the ability to be self-aware, or they are afraid of what they'll see when they look. Nice view of you! Ken Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Sue, Wonderful, cleansing of self...river and water always reminds me of God, so on a personal level I apply this and it reminds me, according to my beliefs we cannot do it alone. I can be willing only...the rest is up to God... I rarely 'reflect' what poet had in mind, and when I read a poem, I own it for that moment, like a garment, trying it on, seeing how it fits.... This one fits perfectly....smiling here... like it much...as I do all your poetry. Hugs to you, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LittleWing~ The title pulled me ... and this is just a beautiful write~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
littlewing - they get better and better... BC |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This shines in sparkle, Sue... brevity looks good on you... |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Well said, oh little wing... Thanks for reminding us to look into this river. TD |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I really enjoyed this fine poem of yours, Dear littlewing--Graceful, introspective writing. Warm hugs, Linda |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
I loved this reflection. Eric |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
and a beautiful river it is |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
smiling at this little jewel yes |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Very nice indeed! Maree |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
I enjoyed reading your write! >>QjQ<< looking forward to reading more! |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
beautiful...like someone i know,,hint not me o0 |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
i liked the title enjoyed |
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dreambuilder Member
since 2003-03-23
Posts 319caddyshack |
I've been taking swimming lessons myself I too am becoming the person i desire to be & strangely... It was me I've had to overcome... not an easy adversary I'm proud of you |
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Ringo
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
I can finally be what I see in the mirrored reflection of the river that runs back to me This is one of your better lines. The entire thing was enjoyed. When the morning cries and you don't know why... |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Beautifully written. -Patricia |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Methinks it 'twas rarest pristine stream that flowed your way. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Beautiful awareness of the element of water and its power to hold secrets and to cleanse and to reflect beauty. Love, Margherita  |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
this is amazingly powerful I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Thank you Secret - glad to see you reading Nan - self-awareness - amazing - didnt "see" that myself TY Ed - hahahahah - yes . . . . Thanks Ken - sweet words for me but I still scare myself . . . Pat - awesome - you know I love when someone gets something out of my writing - it should be applied to the reader and not only the writer - am glad you liked and thank you Marge - nice play on words - thank you Bill - you are much to sweet to me TY Sun - so so sweet . . . thank you TD: your welcome - and thank you EA - coming from you "graceful" means a lot - thank you Ericc - thank you - much too kind Dixie - wow - you are amazing you know that? thank you Bri - thank you - glad I could make you smile . . . Maree - thanks - needed that smiley Q - great - I will look for you too TY Raph - Oh Raphael - this has made my day - truly - and yes like you (shush) xxoo vandana - two smileys - now I am smiling - thank you dream - you got it! and how utterly sweet - thank you - I needed that encouragement up there Brad - thank you - *smiling* - just looked at your signature there . . . Pat - thank you so much Kacy - hmmmmmm . . . get out of my head AGAIN! thank you - so sweet you are Margherita - always making me feel on top of the world - you do thank you KoKo - thank you - powerful . . . Thanks guys xxoo [This message has been edited by littlewing (04-20-2003 03:58 PM).] |
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Ringo
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
You like the signature, Sue??? Bonus points if you can tell me where I "borrowed" it from. When the morning cries and you don't know why... |
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carol Senior Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 624Florida USA |
This is a great poem Real friends celebrate in who we are and have faith in all that we can become |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Thanks carol - good to see you reading me Brad - thanks - and it was the Bee Gees "Tragedy" ha! xxoo |
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