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kaile
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0 posted 2003-05-27 12:00 PM


Vultures hovering
as democracy struggles
to take its last breaths

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Brad Majors
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1 posted 2003-05-27 12:01 PM


Ain't that the truth! Very good piece!
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2 posted 2003-05-27 12:02 PM


I'm going to hide.
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3 posted 2003-05-27 12:41 PM


Scary scenario!

Warm hugs,
EA

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4 posted 2003-05-27 12:41 PM


Kaile, this is a very true observation!!
Hugs,  
Ethel
(LOL at Kacy's reply......it's hard not to say anything on some subjects, isn't it?? )

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5 posted 2003-06-17 10:17 AM


Yeah, hovering overhead, juz waiting for a chance to strike... Good write!

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6 posted 2003-07-28 02:25 AM


Oooh, hehe.. nice. Brilliant title, too Kaile!

Bless your cotten sockies, you poetic maniacs. ^_^

Love - Lynne

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