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In The Rain
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In The Rain |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Listen to the rain There was a time when just the sound of the raindrops was enough to set us soaring. You'd grab my hand and we'd run out to dance, to play, to love in the rain. It was a cleansing, a renewal. Now its just one more hour to get through, one more night. Maybe the next time I'll go out by myself and let the rain caress me. Maybe I'll listen to the thunder and let it entice my feet to dance. Maybe in the flash of lightning you'll see what you are letting slip away. And you'll come to me again... ...in the rain. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Paula, you simply must post more often! I absolutely adore this poem!  Warm hugs, Linda |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Hey lady... Hopefully this is just a mood? (I blame everything on hormones, which is prolly not that far wrong) Sad write, but you've still got it... It's good to see you here again. You oughtta stick around awhile. (ppppsssttt...have ya made "head" nurse yet?   )Hugs you--I'm wicked as ever.  |
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bslicker 
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
 A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Hey, happy to see you back here! But but this is so sad, Paula!  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Paula, welcome home! So glad to see you, and your writing! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
One of my favorites...beautiful expression Paula...James |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssssss) Oh Paula, I'm so happy you're back, dearest friend, it saddens me if this is related to how you're feeling now but know we are all here for you and you are bound to again go singing in the rain! (kiss on cheek) This is a very sadly beautiful comeback, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Paula, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
This is very sad pretty....Nicely imaged all the way through........it reads real blue to me.... Eric |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Hi eveyone...thanks for all the comments. I know I've been away for a while...I just started school yesterday and I'm really excited. I actually start the nursing portion of school in the fall so nobody get sick til then ok? Teehee |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Paula~ Nice to see you here~ Well written piece~ Good luck with that nursing portion of your studies~ Hope all is well in your little corner of this world~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
It's always nice to see you and your beautiful poetry. You sound very happy about your schooling. I wish you well. M |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
The title alone would have drawn me in, but knowing you were the author made this an essential read. Your masterful weaves have been missed my friend, excellent work! And now she's in me, always with me, tiny dancer in my hand ~ Bernie Taupin |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
now it's been far too long since I've read you! and ohh...I LOVE this... and am keeping it  |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
You guys are the reason I've been making time to be here...thanks |
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