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JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2003-04-17 05:31 AM


Why'd You Do That

Am I
a mouse
a meal
to feed
a hungry
cat.

Am I
immune
to pain and
suffering.

Is that
why you
did that?

JamesLee
April16
2003

[This message has been edited by JamesMichael (04-18-2003 06:46 AM).]

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life
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since 2003-04-14
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India
1 posted 2003-04-17 07:24 AM



this touched my heart...


luvs
life

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
2 posted 2003-04-17 09:08 AM


Sharp and painful.
.... just wait, the cat's claws easily transform into velvety paws!
Love, Margherita

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
3 posted 2003-04-17 09:16 AM


Ah sweet James...
I'm sure you did nothing
to deserve this treatment.
Good write.
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
4 posted 2003-04-18 06:50 AM


Thank you life, Margherita and Enchantress...
Your right, I did nothing except arrived ten minutes late...and she has had an earache for the past month so she had to run to the doctors office...as usual I panicked and thought that she was just standing me up...we had a nice talk tonight...James

JamesMichael
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5 posted 2003-08-12 05:01 AM


I gave her a copy of this poem about three days after I wrote it our friendship has been beautiful...James
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