»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #26
»
Writing In The Sand
| Open Poetry #26 |
|
Writing In The Sand |
|
|
WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon 
|
I remember you writing in the sand I recall cryptic etchings cranial wretchings I couldn't make sense of it all. I spiraled, as we walked you talked with the lopsidedness of one who feels he's undone, by mere surroundings, of towering gods. What were the odds, that we would be together, whatever attached by the string of consciousness prolapsed by the ring of senselessness we're both falling, like waves upon shore a landscape that is no more, for the tower's no longer alive. WhiteRose 05/27/03 |
||
| © Copyright 2003 Anne Thompson - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I've been missing you! If this poem is an indication of what has been transpiring in your life, I am sorry to hear it. A rose should be blushing with joy, not frowning in sadness. I await the day, that you post a picture that reflects an inner peace and joy. It will happen, Dear Rose of White! The sun will shine down upon you again! If I'm way off base with this reply, please accept my appologies. This is just how I am reading it. Loving hugs, Linda |
||
garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
What were the odds, that we would be together, whatever attached by the string of consciousness prolapsed by the ring of senselessness we're both falling, like waves upon shore a landscape that is no more, for the tower's no longer alive. Hello Anne  I've missed you and your poetry and your sweet replies. I hope that you're back? As always, this is a very beautiful poem, even though it is sad. I hope things are better now? See you later, Lady Heart hugs  Ethel |
||
|
ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
You have been missed my dear. This write conveys the falling well, as always, expertly penned. A deep descent, that hopefully lands in a meadow gold. Hugs, TD |
||
|
WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Linda, thank you so much, dear lady, for your wonderful response. It's so nice to know that I've been missed. My intentions are always to post everyday. So much for good intentions. Life goes up, then comes down, and it seems I'm always landing flat on my face. For now, life is good. The joy of the Lord is always there, but happiness, and serenity are fleeting. |
||
|
WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Hi Ethel It's always nice to come back among friends. I've missed the smiling faces and the warm friendships. Thank you for being so kind, and always reading my slight attempt at poetry these days. |
||
|
WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
TD, thank you for your kind response. I've been lurking, reading, and always attempting to find the time to post, or to reply, but it seems there just is never enough time.  |
||
|
Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Hey Where have you been Ms Rose? I've missed you. I love how each line of this poem just flows into one another beautifully. The sadness is beautifully expressed. Maree  |
||
|
Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
I spiraled, as we walked you talked with the lopsidedness of one who feels he's undone, by mere surroundings, of towering gods. This is awesome writing. Like the others, I too have missed your poetry. hugs, Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
||
|
WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Hello Maree, I've been around. Just quietly reading, and keeping to myself. Sometimes it's necessary. I'm not even sure why... |
||
|
WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Chris, thank you for your kind words. Life happens, and we just go along. I'm still singing my song, I'm just singing it on the inside more now. I've missed this place... [This message has been edited by WhiteRose (05-27-2003 07:15 PM).] |
||
|
Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
WhiteRose~ It's nice to read you~ This is a lovely piece~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
||
|
JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
This brought back a beautiful memory to me of many years ago when me and my girlfriend Nancy were walking on the beach and we noticed a large round object about five foot high floating towards the shore...it was a large metal float...we rolled it onto the sand and we wrote love letters all over it where the sand stuck to the float...James |
||
|
Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssssss) Oh Anne, I'm glad to see you have returned, and I'm so sorry if tis ramble is relating to your own personal happenings, as we are all here to offer our hugs to you! (sad sigh) Keep etching in the sand for the calling will be done, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Anne, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
||
|
Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
It is good to see you, WhiteRose! The imagery in this of the sand and towers, makes me think of something fleeting, that is built to stand tall, but built of material that will be taken back out to sea. A lovely expression! |
||
|
QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
very loving thoughts!! heres a short one i posted. /pip/Forum79/HTML/002077.html QjQ |
||
|
passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I was beginning to wonder if you'd vanished...glad to see you here again, I thought I was gonna hafta make a road trip up there to make sure you were okay. |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
