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whiskey
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0 posted 2003-05-24 10:44 PM


In my minds eye
I see you holding me
Kissing me
In my thoughts
I am wanting you
In my dreams
...loving you

[This message has been edited by whiskey (05-24-2003 10:46 PM).]

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Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2003-05-24 10:53 PM


Hello Julie!
I hope he sees the same scenery.
Good write. It's nice to see you return to the board.

jwesley
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2 posted 2003-05-24 11:58 PM


Hopefully the rest of your life is a beautiful as this, my friend...

jwesley

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3 posted 2003-05-25 12:10 PM


...Sweet dreams, Julie!  

May your visions, thoughts and dreams be  reflections of a loving reality...

Lovin' hugs,
Linda

nakdthoughts
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4 posted 2003-05-25 12:26 PM


Very pretty, Julie

*s
M

passing shadows
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5 posted 2003-05-25 12:33 PM


nice
teledon
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6 posted 2003-05-25 12:49 PM


love the brevity .. you said much,
with feeling, in very few words
don

"keep it simple"

QjQ
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7 posted 2003-05-25 03:10 AM


loving thoughts you have written,  WoW!!!

QjQ

Richy
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8 posted 2003-05-25 03:54 AM





Julie I really like your style of writing. Even in a short poem like this, I can appreciate not only how well thought out it is, but how meaningful it is as well.

A wonderful talent you have...


Richy



Margherita
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9 posted 2003-05-25 04:09 AM


Beautiful harmony between mind and dreams ...
Very lovely.
Love, Margherita

Marge Tindal
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10 posted 2003-05-25 06:50 PM


Julie~
Lovely words ... even lovelier new photo~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*`

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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BluesSerenade
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11 posted 2003-05-26 01:07 AM


Short and sweet, and filled with romance.

~may your dreams last long~

icebox
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12 posted 2003-05-26 01:11 AM


Nice thought!  Very simple and clear.  Thank you for sharing it.
vandana
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13 posted 2003-05-27 08:24 PM


nice
passing shadows
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displaced
14 posted 2003-05-28 03:17 AM


short and sweet
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