»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #26
»
Faceless Love
| Open Poetry #26 |
|
Faceless Love |
|
Ringo 
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes 
|
You see me here And think you know me Though we have never met Just because I by chance Glanced your way In the heat of the action On stage that night The alcohol was strong But you felt it was true The songs I sang of our love When, in fact, my eyes saw Another in the distance Even if she wasn't there I shook your hand And the hug from you As the roll I play requires Bu in the light of day I find that your name is not there Your face has escaped my mind And you have become just another On the stop towards home *thoughts on being caught in the grocery by someone who followed a former band* Day after day I'm more confused, So I look for the light through the pouring rain... [This message has been edited by Ringo (05-27-2003 03:51 AM).] |
||
| © Copyright 2003 Bradly Stott - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
that's kinda cold...but I like it |
||
|
jjote Senior Member
since 2002-12-25
Posts 1088Ontario, Canada |
"Your face has secaped my mind And you have become just another On the stop towards home" Sad..these lines just say it all for the title. |
||
|
KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
nice job... Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
