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Open Poetry #26

Faceless Love

Ringo

Member Elite

since 2003-02-20

Posts 3684
Saluting with misty eyes

0 posted 2003-05-27 03:26 AM

You see me here
And think you know me
Though we have never met
Just because I by chance
Glanced your way
In the heat of the action
On stage that night
The alcohol was strong
But you felt it was true
The songs I sang of our love
When, in fact, my eyes saw
Another in the distance
Even if she wasn't there
I shook your hand
And the hug from you
As the roll I play requires
Bu in the light of day
I find that your name is not there
Your face has escaped my mind
And you have become just another
On the stop towards home

*thoughts on being caught in the grocery by someone who followed a former band*

Day after day I'm more confused,
So I look for the light through the pouring rain...

[This message has been edited by Ringo (05-27-2003 03:51 AM).]

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2003-05-27 03:30 AM

that's kinda cold...but I like it

jjote
Senior Member

since 2002-12-25

Posts 1088
Ontario, Canada

2 posted 2003-05-27 03:44 AM

"Your face has secaped my mind
And you have become just another
On the stop towards home"

Sad..these lines just say it all for the title.

KristieSue

Senior Member

since 2003-01-31

Posts 1460
PA, US

3 posted 2003-05-27 06:57 AM

nice job...

Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS

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