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Titia Geertman
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0 posted 2003-05-26 08:56 PM





Like scattered leaves...my words will flow

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Ceinwyn
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1 posted 2003-05-26 08:59 PM


your words are very touching...its truly a day to remember and the ironic part is my grandfather passed this morning...on memorial day..*sigh* sorry feeling a bit funky..

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

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2 posted 2003-05-26 09:02 PM




(big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, dearest friend, and though this is our nations Memorial Day, I don't only pray for and salute American troops on this special day, I also salute the troops of every country, as they too have motherlands that they fondle with love and compassion just like we do! (wipes tears) I support our troops, I support Holland's troops, I support all the troops, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Titia, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

Duncan
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3 posted 2003-05-26 09:03 PM


I remember this one Titia and the new jacket fits well!  
Balladeer
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4 posted 2003-05-26 10:09 PM


Absolutely beautiful, Titia. Your words are so honest and sincere....who would not fight to keep you and your country free? The soldiers buried in your land have a good home.....
ecrivan
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5 posted 2003-05-26 11:14 PM


a wonderful thought behind this Titia..and for the sake of all those families that have
survived the trauma of that last great conflict


passing shadows
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6 posted 2003-05-27 03:13 AM


I musta had too many drinks...I had to really make an effort to read the ending...beautiful picture and color...but wow...maybe if you could lighten the text color towards the end, maybe fade into a tan yellow beige kind of color, or maybe the same color as the top or even the middle part of the picture? what do you think? I think it would match the upper part of the picture beautifully! Nice write.

[This message has been edited by passing shadows (05-27-2003 03:15 AM).]

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