Open Poetry #26 |
Storming |
the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
In the distance the thunder claps The lightning lights up the dark sky The clouds roll closer and closer The wind starts to whip up You can hear the rain pouring In the distance Slowing creeping to where you live Now the thunder is right over your house The lightning lights up your room The wind makes the tree branches Scrape against your window The rain is pounding the ground The storm has arrived Now you drift off to sleep As the storm rages outside Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Edder Senior Member
since 2003-04-02
Posts 671 |
i've spent enough nights on Amelia Island to know exactly what you speak of. enjoyed |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
freaky weather changes occur...where will it all go?...nice account |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
LONER'S BACK! YESSSSS!!!!! I knew this was gonna be a good day! And a nice one to come back with, moving out a bit into new pastures. Good to see ya, kid! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I love a good storm too. (It's the really bad ones that scare the hell outta me.) Welcome home Julie. Good to have you back. |
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ThunderMage Senior Member
since 2002-06-20
Posts 812Canada |
The thunder is my heart beating when I think about you. What is life without poetry and adventure? |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
I love storms! ~Elizabeth Dreams last for so long, even after you're gone... |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
BEAUTIFUL....I LOVE STORMS...THIS POEM BROUGHT ONE TO LIFE FOR ME...BRAVO!!! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
love this! |
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