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Open Poetry #26
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D.Lester Young
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since 2001-12-08
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0 posted 2003-05-26 03:09 PM

Weight of the world,
spirit hammered,
gravity of thoughts,
fog of loneliness,
choking emotions.

The sight of you,
bringing fresh air,
recirculating my heart,
renewing my strength
in a lightened load.

A rainbow hug
in a mirrored smile
blossoming in tenderness
from a magical personality
that is you.


D.Lester Young
Somewhere in America not on company time 05/21/03
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QjQ
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1 posted 2003-05-26 03:15 PM

very nice thoughts expressed

QjQ

passing shadows
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2 posted 2003-05-27 04:03 AM

good write!
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